Surpentheon Fanglord

Posts : 38 Points : 44 Join date : 2010-03-22

Fanglord,Surpentheon

Gender: Male
Age: 12

Height: 5'3"
Body Type: Standing about 5'3", he looks quite young, even for his age. His skin is pale, almost milk-like. But under his skin lies a network of hardened muscles with an amazingly high concentration of electrolites. This enhances his strength tenfold, but you can't tell till he exerts himself. Then his true muscular demeanor is revealed.
Weight: 110 lbs.

Appearance. Appearing to be angry almost all the time until he actually smiles, Surp array of colors don't help him make it appear any different. He has blood red hair the goes well with his usual black or dark blue kimono top. Beneath the ominous hair though lurks inchanting eyes of glowing gold. His kimono opens around the neck enough to reveal his muscular chest, but just a little. The kimono top is then tucked in and the rest of his lower half is covered by sheep white pants with a ripped edge look. Lastly is his hands and feet. On his hands, he wears simple but sturdy braces to help deflect kunai and ninja stars. On his feet, simple and humble socks and reed sandles.

Personality: Usually quiet, he comes off aggressive most of the time when he speaks. He may not mean to, but he may end up saying offensive words. Yet again, he tries to stay to himself for the most part. But when forced into action, he likes to cooperate and use his keen intellect. He's thrilled at the thought of fighting and will help anyone who he thinks will assist him in making a name.

Likes: Lightning, Dragons, Swords, Fighting, and Women

Dislikes: Weaklings, Getting Wet ,and Being of No Help
Habits: Loves to use ninjutsu, answers in odd ways, sometimes ignores people a lot

Background

~Bio~

Growing up on the outter border of the Land of Thunder, he spent the first years of his life in the fields hard at work. He would sometimes dream of becoming a ninja like those he so often saw making their way by his families home. His birth father had been a great shinobi and died in War. He was honored by the Kage himself and Surp swore one day to be even greater than his father so as to make him proud and honor his family.

But his stepfather put Surp down, he said that he should stick to what he knew and that was fieldwork. Finally, Surp grew old enough to enter the Academy and sought for his mother and stepfathers permission to enter. But again, he was denied. But Surps intent of becoming a shinobi was far greater than his respect for his elders. So, the night before the Academy opened to students, Surp slipped from his window and ran to the village. He would now forge his way through history and grow into a powerful master. One day, even surpassing his own father.

Shinobi Registration

Style: Ninjutsu, Weaponry
Elements: Lightning

Primary Elements

Lightning

Combination Element

None

Village: Thunder
Rank: Academy Student
Clan: N/A
Bloodline Trait: N/A
Strengths: Lightning, Ninjutsu, Sealing Jutsu, Large Chakra Pool, and Releasing Genjutsu
Weaknesses: Taijutsu, Wind, Long-Range Combat, Armored Opponents, and Feelings

Equipment:

* Swords (Ordinary Katana and small sword. Located on left hip)
* 10 Kunai (4 in back pouch, and 4 in my sash around hip, and 1 in each sleeve)
* 1 Kunai that infuses itself with elemental chakra which allows it to take on different properties pertaining to the designated element infused.
* 5 ninja stars (All in back pouch)
* 15 bomb tags (In a seperate location in back pouch. Wrapped into a ball for better transportation means)

Fighting Techniques:

Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Consumption: None

Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.

Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: 1
Chakra Consumption: Low

Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: 3
Chakra Consumption: Low-Mid depending on scale

Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to tranform themself into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: 5
Chakra Consumption: Low

Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Note: This jutsu is not an escape-all skill that a character may use. It must be performed in situations where your character has time to anticipate an oncoming attack and likewise perform the needed handseals for a stance swap. It should also be noted that this jutsu is not something that allows you to swap with random logs in the field. Be reasonable. If you plant items ahead of time, great. But if you're in the middle of a desert and you swap with a log, I'm going to punch you in your shit.

Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Consumption: Low

Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Kai
Rank: E
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Consumption: None

This jutsu is manditory for all those who wish not to be beaten by Genjutsu. The user concetrates on his chakra flow and attempts to stop it/disrupt it as much as possible. This causes the Genjutsus hold to break and release the user from the genjutsu. The further you slow your chakra the easier it is to break the genjutsus hold. Stopping completely is hardest but most effective way of cancelling a genjutsu.

Summoning Technique: Static Sage
Rank: B
Range: Short Range
Style: Fūinjutsu

The user must make a tiger seal and force very little amount of chakra into the tatoo then it will glow yellow in a matter of milisecounds Neo will be comming out of the user's back. But the summoning only works if the static sage is in this world and if he has chakra in his system! The static sage will leave any area in this world and be transported where the user is!

Relationships: N/A
Family: N/A

Other: Surp has a rare ability to sense and manipulate electricity. This is due to an extremely high concentration of electrolites throughout his body. But as Surp grows, this massive infestation collects into a collective being causing Surp's mind to develope another side. He calls it by what it is, a Demon side. He believes that it is an asset and hopes to use it as he developes over time.

Posts : 61 Points : 81 Join date : 2010-03-18

Please use the correct template thats here for you too fill out, the same for jutsus too.

Posts : 38 Points : 44 Join date : 2010-03-22

I did use the template.

Posts : 145 Points : 173 Join date : 2010-02-14

Alright, here is the template. It is true that you do have the right template order, but the groupings have been altered. This isn't a terrible problem or anything so don't sweat it. I will, however, highlight things you need to add to or change. Anything in bold with a color added to it will be something that must be altered or added.

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Alias: (Any nicknames or aliases your character might have)
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Appearance:
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Personality:
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Background

History:
(Give a description of your character's bio. Make it several paragraphs long, with at least one paragraph relating to any particular part of your character's past that is worth mentioning. Don't be stingey or lazy!)

Shinobi Registration

Style: Ninjutsu, Weaponry
Element(s): (Post Primary and Combination elements below. There is a maximum of two primary elements and one combination element at this time)

Primary Elements

Combination Element

Village: (Which village do you reside in? Look at the country list for reference)
Rank: (Academy student, Genin, Chuunin, Jounin, Special Jounin, or Kage)
Clan: (If you have one)
Bloodline Trait: (If you have one)
Strengths: (3-5 Combat related strengths)
Weaknesses: (3-5 Combat related weaknesses)

Equipment:

(Here's where you post your items. Go ahead and place them after the bolded asterisk in list form. Also include where they are in relation to your body and outfit.)

* (Item)
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Fighting Techniques:
(Whichever jutsus you have, look at the jutsu limitations for references)

Relationships: (Friends and acquaintances)
Family: (Any family members in the forum)

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Subject: Re: Surpentheon Fanglord Thu Mar 25, 2010 4:28 pm

Explanation:

*He is an AS
*He doesn't need a long Bio, He is a good rper plus he is an As 2paragraphs is fair.
*The items aren't alot. Naruto and sasuke has up the ass items.

Just try to be more fair to people. They have there own visions of there characters nothing has to be 100% because it isn't there rp character anymore if we are strict on them everyone should express there imagination. Just try looking for godmodding ideals, EX. Jutsu or elements or abilities..

So far Surp hit many key points I approved this.

Now Surp did follow the jutsu template, hitting key point wnds he even put the chakra consumption. Kudoos to you surp have fun rping.

PS. Im not trying to sound harsh sorry if i do.

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