Kiryu Mouchizuki

Name: Kiryu Mouchizuki
Alias:The Shattered Blade, The Dark blood, The Kin Slayer.
Explanation behind Alias:(none)
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Height: 5'6"
Body Type: Slim, Muscular
Weight: 126

Appearance:
Kiryu is a tall thin boy. His eyes are a glazed emerald green, his hair is long with a sickly silver luster and distinct red tips. he is slightly muscular and has a diamond shaped mark on his ches and in a similar area on his back. He wears a long black coat and underneath he wears a black cotton gi with a red diamond insignia and a fishnet shirt under that. his pants are part of the uniform but a re worn and tattered from long use and age.

Personality:
Calm, Nonchlant, relaxed.

Likes: Sleep, cooking, sparring
Dislikes: People, ignorance, being disruted or interrupted during a battle.
Habits: licking his fingers or cracking his neck and shoulders during a fight or in mid-sentence.

Background

History: Kiryu was the youngest of his siblings, but was ultimately disowned by his family for his inability to use the families bloodline and being the only member of the family to choose to use wind and water over earth and lightning.
Kiryu was given the name The Dark Blood of the Mouchizuki because on the day of his birth his mother died in labor and he was born inside of her dead body. Though she had died after many writhing muscle spasms he survived the trauma and was extracted from the corpse.
Kiryu's Father blamed him for his mother's death and since he became of age put him through rigorous training in an attempt to break him and force his son to leave the village. Kiryu Passed each test without the family's bloodline and was reveared only by his sister as a genius.
On his 14th birthday he was given the title the Shattered Blade because by that age he had won many battles and passed each of his father's tests without fail. Later that Night his father was killed and he was exiled because the clan Believed he had done it and gave him the cursed name of The Kin Slayer because of his mother's incident and the assassination of his father.

Shinobi Registration

Style: Weaponry, Taijutsu,ninjutsu
Element(s):
Primary Elements
Wind, Water
Combination Element
Rain

Village: Eruption
Rank: Chuunin
Clan: Mouchizuki(Disowned/exiled)
Bloodline Trait: None
Strengths: Speed, sword techniques, throwing weapons, ninjutsu/taijutsu combination attacks
Weaknesses: Low regeneration time, inability to use healing techniques, fast chakra comsuption

Equipment:


Long Bladed Katana
A small necklace. His mother's keepsake.


Fighting Techniques:
Wind Style Wind Blade Technique
Weapon
Rank:B
Range: 15-20 feet
Description: The user focuses chakra to his or her blade and concentrates it on the wind in order to compact it into a small whilwind around the blade. The user's blade then becomes shrouded in wind and when given momentum, The wind erupts outward in a blast-like manner similar to the kamaitachi no justsu or wind scythe technique.

Raging wind jutsu
Taijutsu
Rank:C
Range: 10 feet(max)
description: The user claps his or her hands together and releases chakra into the air in order to give them control over the wind in the immidiate area. After the concentration process is complete the user is given the ability to combine wind affinity with Taijutsu techniques.

Side effects: user becomes slightly dazed and is drained of a substansial amount of chakra.

Terraforming Jutsu
Ninjutsu
Rank:B
Range: immediate area + 1000 meters
description: The user preforms an intricate 13 hand seal sequence that, upon completion gives the user the ability to transform the area into one that favors their situation.
Side effects: lasts 10min. and user must use jutsu that match the area's elemental affinity

Water Style- water barrier jutsu
Ninjutsu
Rank:D
Range: immidiate area around user
description: The user weaves 3 hand seals in order to block an incoming attack and create a barrier around the user.
side effects: user must remain stationary.

Saton- Suiredon no rendan. Water style Water dragon Barrage.
Ninjutsu
Rank:B
Range: 1000 meters
description: the person preforms the multi shadow clone jutsu and each clone preforms the water dragon technique and, upon completion and execution of said technique, each clone transforms into a water dragon and rush at the enemy.


Relationships: none
Family: None

Name: Name of the Technique in Japanese (Optional) - English version of the name.
Rank: Any rank ranging from S rank (the strongest) to E rank (the most basic).
Range: Short-long distance; w-x meters (y-z feet)
Style: Element, Fighting style (Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Weapon, or Genjutsu)
Description:
A detailed description of the technique is to be put here. This is to show how it appears, what it does, how powerful it is, and how much preparation is involved in the technique. Also, remember to add any other supporting details such as chakra costs, and side effects of the technique.

use this template for your jutsu/techniques and place the location of your blade example

*Blade- Right side hooked upon his belt

Choose a village lol , Thunder , eruption, blizzard, heaven

and can you make your
histori a bit longer like how did you come across your elements. And how you came to a village =]

Yes, please do use the correct formatting when posting your applications in the future. Also, I have a few more things I'd like to have you alter.

Two things wrong with this portion here. First off - if your character has a nickname or alias, it -must- have an explanation behind it/them. Please include a three sentence paragraph for the three nicknames. One sentence a piece should do fine in this case.

Second off- when making a character's weight, you are to include it's measurement system. Please add either the metric (kilograms) or the English (pounds) system's appropriate measurement to it. Otherwise we can't possibly imagine whether your character is a large person, or a slender person.

Spoiler:

Your character's personality is to be in sentence form with explanations as to how and why it would act these ways. Please rewrite it with a minimum of one paragraph and four sentences. o-o Simple enough.

Spoiler:

You're going for a Chuunin rank, however, your character's history isn't long enough to cover its past effectively. Please add more details to it such as an event in the character's childhood that adds to it's upbringing and personality today. I suggest adding at least a minimum of three paragraphs with no fewer than four sentences per paragraph. o-o

Spoiler:

Just a quick warning and error fix here... Your character will have three attack styles. However, this is uncommon for a chuunin who is just starting out. Be forewarned that until you rank up further your characters techniques will be limited in number. Try limiting it to two types of combat skills for now.

Also, a quick error fix here... When posting your combination element, you are to show which two elements are combined in order to make it. "Wind and Water - Rain" or something like that.

Spoiler:

Your equipment list is lacking for a Chuunin. I will not make you add anything inparticular, but it would be advised to have a pouch or something of a similar nature which holds basic Shinobi weapons such as Kunai, Shuriken, Chakra wire, Exploding tags, or smoke bombs. Remember, if you are to have anything that you may want customised for rp purposes, you'll have to post them in an additional post as well as have them on your original listing. Anything customised should have a brief description of the item under it's name (different post, though. x3).

Spoiler:

Your techniques are lacking, but you can add them and format them to the correct template that has been stated above. o-o If you've got any questions - please do not refrain from pm'ing me. :3 I'll be glad to help.