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PostSubject: Kei Ikuhara   Kei Ikuhara Icon_minitimeMon Apr 05, 2010 6:27 pm

Event Character


Name: Kei Ikuhara (Kei means "joyfull" from japanese)
Alias: Sage of Aeon, Giichi
Explanation behind Alias:
Kei Ikuhara is an unknown entity who has been rumored to have lived for several centuries. It is said that Kei, along with her brother, in their youth, came across a technique so formidable that it was known to stop the time of those who use it. This being said, allowed him to live for what seems to be an inevitable eternity.

Giichi (translated by "one rule" from japanese) is the name of her male appearance.

Gender: Female, but disguised as a male.
Age: 279 (Appearance 19)
Height: 6"0'
Body Type: Tall and meak when she's in a her girl appearance. She's tall and muscular when she's in her male appearance.
Weight: 145 lbs

Appearance:
Kei has two appearances. Her original one, and her male form.
Her female appearance is all pink, pink, pink. Hair, clothes, shoes, skirt, etc. She looks like a happy person, always smiling, always jumpy and agile under that form.

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Her male form is different. It's all in purpleish shades. Hair, clothes, shoes, aura... the perfect physical copy of her brother..

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Personality:
Kei is a hyper active, laughing spring, hug, cling, glomp, snuggle, cuddle girl. She's always positive, smiling and giggeling. She will always try to cheer her depressed brother up and even try to "hook him up" which always epically fails. She sees Nagasu as her model and copies him in any possible way in his ways of the ninja. She also imitates a lesbian personality, only to make her brother feel at ease.

That is her outwardly appearance. Inside of that cute package is a independant and caring spirit, full with fire, jealousy, anger, shame and sadness. She's ashamed of her broter's nature, of her being, of her way of living, of herself. She hates death, blood, injustice. Her anger is created by the fate she got. Her spirit pushes her to fight with her brother and help him, but pushes her to always survive no matter what.

Of the "Golden Pair", like she calls her duo with her brother, she considers herself as the mentally strongest and the physically weakest.

Kei is very familiar with people, never speaks formally and never bowed to anyone. She declares that the only person that'll manage to make her bow will be her boyfriend.

Likes: Men, wine, cold metal objects, pink, blue, dolls.
Dislikes: Most women, the elderly, cold people, herself.
Habits: Kei, like her brother Nagase has a tendency to lick his kunai during a battle. Often times he has been known to taste his opponents blood as well as revel in their pain. He does not hesitate to kill women and does so frequently.
She also tacklehugglompsnuggleclings everyone she meets and likes and says "Nya~" in almost all her sentences.


Background

History:
During her childhood, Kei has always been compared to Nagase, the better twin. She was the girl, who was pink haired too, so, obligatory stupid too, and by definition to be ignored and brought down.
At the academy, she wasn't Kei, she was "Nagase's sister" or "The copy-cat". Since then, she had been training hard to be like her brother all the time. Till she discovered her wasn't that great like she thought he was. Taunted by the girls of their own class, she understood he wasn't happy and perfect either. So, instead of wanting to beat him, she grew to support him.

While she knew of her brothers sexual orientation and hatred for women, she helped him to cover his murders and entered by force his team, by killing one of the genin and covering it up. She kept imitating her brother, while learning secretly some genjutsus she found in scrolls. She came to love those techniques scarily and became a great expert in physical genjutsus and became able to become anyone she wanted to be, without making herself discovered. She grew to love "Giichi", her male appearance she kept almost all the time to help her brother to feel more at ease around her.

Kei soon turned the age of 19 when he came across a jutsu unlike any she had seen nor has been seen since. A witch of sorts who dwelled within the mountain pass of the FireCrest mountain range had given it to her and her brother of her own free will. In return, they were to spend their days with the woman until she perished. The witch had cast this curse upon them knowing that they would be the end of her. Foreseeing her fate, she had known that this curse, unlike any others, would be the most painful.

As the years passed, Kei and Nagase noticed their body did not age, they did not hunger or thirst. They were never tired nor did they ever feel restless. It was during this time that they trained his body in their own ways. His being the arts of ninjutsu and taijutsu, of which his skills have become supreme. Kei followed that path like a perfect copy, but also developping her genjutsu disguise skills.

Within the first fifty years of his life, her family died off one by one. Unable to age, the villagers saw her and her brother as monsters and attempted to banish them from their realm. Kei and Nagase did not regret what was to come next, for they slaughtered almost each and every villager- men, women, and children alike. He left but one tired old man to tell the story of the village's downfall. She left the life of a little girl spared for the same goal. But also out of disgusting of all the blood that had to be shed for their own survival. This gave them the titles of "Sages of Aeon."

Over the years, she discovered their major weakness in their perefect duo; themselves. Their blood had only to touch them to transform them into a red crystal and then to turn them into dust. It was then when Kei deceided that her main goal was to make her brother survive at any costs.

People would say that Kei is trapped in her situation and is a cowardly person. She isn't. She chose to stay at the side of her brother, loving him more then anything else on the world even if he's the cause of the most misfortunes in her life.


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Style: Ninjutsu, Weaponry
Element(s):

Primary Elements
Earth
Wind
Fire


Combination Element
Earth and Wind - Dust
Fire and Earth - Lava


Village: The Abyss (event village)
Rank: Jounin
Clan: N/A
Bloodline Trait: Eternity Flux
Strengths: Extremely fast, unrivaled agility, astounding foresight, fast in reacting, and trained in the art of stealth.
Weaknesses: The blood of Nagase, not specially strong, beats herself up for anything bad that happens to the people she appreciates.

Equipment:

* Pink sportive clothes (transformed into a blue outfit when under Giichi).
* 15 barb tipped senbon (concealed beneath her clothing; in her sleeves).
* Chakra Channeling Blade (carried by sling on her back).
* 3 Tanto (various lengths - Strapped to her waist).
* A medium sized pouch. (resting upon the hip).
* 50 Chakra Disturbance Spikes (within pouch).
* 15 Kunai (of various natures; within pouch).
* 10 additional senbon (within pouch).
* 5 summoning scrolls (within the pouch).
* 1 Executioner's blade (summoned by a scroll).
* 2 double sided scabards (summoned by a scroll).
* 50 Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon (summoned by a scroll).
* 15 exploding tags (summoned by a scroll)
* 200 feet of chakra wire (summoned by a scroll).
* Black boots that reaches her knees (with metallic plates on the sole and hidden knifes in the boots itself.)

Fighting Techniques:

Special Techniques:

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S-rank

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A-rank

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B-rank

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C-rank

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D-rank

D-rank

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E-rank

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Relationships: Abyss members
Family: Nagase Ikuhara - Twin brother.
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PostSubject: Re: Kei Ikuhara   Kei Ikuhara Icon_minitimeTue Apr 06, 2010 6:40 am

Meet Nagase's partner, Kei~
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PostSubject: Re: Kei Ikuhara   Kei Ikuhara Icon_minitimeTue Apr 06, 2010 5:42 pm

Ok was asked to look this over a bit and I will point out my problems with it.

First off, I will start with I like everything till bloodline, since there is no application filed. Second one thing disturbs me. You can only die by each others blood and severe damage (heart and brain pretty much have to be removed), this seems a bit oped for a bloodline even for event characters. Even Hidan in his invincability from the following of his religion had weaknesses based on the fact he had very few jutsus, but here you have a full battery and pretty much invincible and I would need a definition of never tiring, I hope that means sleep and not chakra also (though I doubt you would do that but I dont see a description of what the never tiring applies to so need to be certain). Another thing is that I am concerned over, is after reading your application is then I begin to think of your brohers even more. You did put your own personal weaknesses to it (aka. Though smarter acts like your brother instead and since your weaker physically your attacks wont be as strong) but then what weaknesses has Negase have then to weaken this bloodline, and all I can come up with is not much.

Next jutsus. I know you used copy paste jutsus but there is a couple I question.
Name: Dochuu Eigyo - Underground Projection
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu
Description:
Similar to the Moguragakure technique, this jutsu sends it's user underneath the surface of the ground using earthen elemental chakra. By utilizing his or her earth style chakra he or she will be able to stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the topsoil around them.

what is the range on this. If you are going to use this jutsu we need a range. I would recommend using Kisame's version instead.

Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Kisame can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. By extending his Samehada above ground, he gives off the appearance of a shark travelling underground.

You could of course eliminate the sword above surface part of course.

Another problem
Name: Senpuu Engetsutou - Whirlwind Scimitar
Rank: B
Range: Short distance; 0-2 meters (0-6.5 feet).
Style: Wind style, Ninjutsu
Description:
The Senpuu Engetsutou technique is used in hand to hand combat as a surprise attack. While using normal weapons in combat is usual on the battle field, this curved edged blade is made entirely of elemental wind chakra which will allow for the user of this technique to gain an upper hand in battle. This technique, however, is also able to be combined with normal weaponry in that it can surround the blade so that it may cut through anothers defenses. This technique is efficient in cutting through solid objects quickly as well as other objects.

and

Name: Kasai Chakra Yaiba - Fiery Chakra Blade
Rank: C
Range: Short distance, 0-2 meters (0-6.5 feet)
Style: Fire style, ninjutsu
Description:
Kasai Chakra Yaiba is a technique in which the user uses a blade made entirely of his or her elemental chakra. In the case of Kasai Chakra Yaiba, it is a fire element technique. In this technique the user forms a steady flow of chakra into his or her hand (left of right, depending on his or her preferences). This technique, however can be used simply to give the user an advantage by channeling the elemental chakra through a blade as well. This is said to add an effective melting force to the blade of which it is focused into, as well as allows the user to send off fiery waves of chakra outward at an opponent. These chakra waves, however, are not intense enough to cause serious burns, but will scold the user's opponent nonetheless.

Read these two...I know a site says there rank but realistically they are almost the exact same jutsu, except one is wind and the other is fire. Both of course would have different effects due to the element involved. Plus I would say having a melting and scolding effect is just as strong as winds cutting through defense. So I would say we need a ruling on whether these should be C-rank jutsus or B-rank jutsus permanently.

After posting this I realized what account I am on XD
This is moderator Chojiro and to lazy at the moment to repost under my moderator account.
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PostSubject: Re: Kei Ikuhara   Kei Ikuhara Icon_minitimeWed Apr 07, 2010 1:02 am

o-o erm...We're physically even strong. But, I'm a copy of my brother, not really my own individual in battle. O.o so, I got a huge weakness there, since I've not really my own will.
Other major weakness I have is Nagase's blood. o-o one drop, and the place where it touched becomes crystal dust and if I can't cut it off, in the next minute, Kei is no more. Same for Nagase, even if he doesn't know that.
Last weakness of mine is more a mental weakness. If anything bad happens to any people I know and/or like, I beat myself up. Which means distracted in battle or a higher agressivity level which will make me take actions which won't be thought out.

o-o about the jutsus. That's Dante's job xD Ask him about it~ ^^;

(e-e PS: I'm too lazy to log in my other account too)
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PostSubject: Re: Kei Ikuhara   Kei Ikuhara Icon_minitimeWed Apr 07, 2010 1:21 am

e.e I'm going to say this and say it once.


The reason Kasai Chakra Yaiba is a C-rank is that it has a lesser effect. It will cause burns, but won't have the ability to incinerate where as the other. The Senpuu Engetsutou is used to cut through solid objects directly. Melting an object takes much more time than that of pressurized razor sharp wind. It's obvious that it would take finer chakra control to use Senpuu Engetsutou than it would Kasai Chakra Yaiba.

Senpuu Engetsutou, however, is the sudden, violent channeling of wind element chakra in order to take an opponent by surprise. This is indeed a higher rank technique in that it is not constant.

All in all, Senpuu Engetsutou's attack has a more effective damage ratio than that of the Kasai Chakra Yaiba. e.e Don't ever think I haven't thought these things through, lacky~ *noms*
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PostSubject: Re: Kei Ikuhara   Kei Ikuhara Icon_minitimeWed Apr 07, 2010 9:53 am

Um first I disagree about both of those you need to read the fire one in more detail, of course adding wind element is going to make a blade sharper that is the nature of the element, that said fire is going to burn so thus your point is null and void.

Serious burns serves as a distraction and limiting of the area that is burned plus the jutsu specifically says it melts objects it comes in contact with. Thus destroying weapons and armor, I would think that would put it on par with the wind scimitar.

The other issue you have not adressed is this one.

Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Kisame can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. By extending his Samehada above ground, he gives off the appearance of a shark travelling underground.

I think you should use this jutsu in stead of:

Name: Dochuu Eigyo - Underground Projection
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu
Description:
Similar to the Moguragakure technique, this jutsu sends it's user underneath the surface of the ground using earthen elemental chakra. By utilizing his or her earth style chakra he or she will be able to stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the topsoil around them.

This one since, this is way to Oped. I mean come on, it has no limiter to how long one can stay under ground. It has no limit to how far you can move. It is just way to over powered.
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PostSubject: Re: Kei Ikuhara   Kei Ikuhara Icon_minitimeWed Apr 07, 2010 3:05 pm

I hope he switches the eart travel jutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Kei Ikuhara   Kei Ikuhara Icon_minitimeWed Apr 07, 2010 3:05 pm

Thank you~
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