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| Event CharacterName: Kei Ikuhara (Kei means "joyfull" from japanese) Alias: Sage of Aeon, Giichi Explanation behind Alias:Kei Ikuhara is an unknown entity who has been rumored to have lived for several centuries. It is said that Kei, along with her brother, in their youth, came across a technique so formidable that it was known to stop the time of those who use it. This being said, allowed him to live for what seems to be an inevitable eternity. Giichi (translated by "one rule" from japanese) is the name of her male appearance. Gender: Female, but disguised as a male. Age: 279 (Appearance 19) Height: 6"0' Body Type: Tall and meak when she's in a her girl appearance. She's tall and muscular when she's in her male appearance. Weight: 145 lbs Appearance:Kei has two appearances. Her original one, and her male form. Her female appearance is all pink, pink, pink. Hair, clothes, shoes, skirt, etc. She looks like a happy person, always smiling, always jumpy and agile under that form. Her male form is different. It's all in purpleish shades. Hair, clothes, shoes, aura... the perfect physical copy of her brother.. Personality: Kei is a hyper active, laughing spring, hug, cling, glomp, snuggle, cuddle girl. She's always positive, smiling and giggeling. She will always try to cheer her depressed brother up and even try to "hook him up" which always epically fails. She sees Nagasu as her model and copies him in any possible way in his ways of the ninja. She also imitates a lesbian personality, only to make her brother feel at ease. That is her outwardly appearance. Inside of that cute package is a independant and caring spirit, full with fire, jealousy, anger, shame and sadness. She's ashamed of her broter's nature, of her being, of her way of living, of herself. She hates death, blood, injustice. Her anger is created by the fate she got. Her spirit pushes her to fight with her brother and help him, but pushes her to always survive no matter what. Of the "Golden Pair", like she calls her duo with her brother, she considers herself as the mentally strongest and the physically weakest. Kei is very familiar with people, never speaks formally and never bowed to anyone. She declares that the only person that'll manage to make her bow will be her boyfriend. Likes: Men, wine, cold metal objects, pink, blue, dolls. Dislikes: Most women, the elderly, cold people, herself. Habits: Kei, like her brother Nagase has a tendency to lick his kunai during a battle. Often times he has been known to taste his opponents blood as well as revel in their pain. He does not hesitate to kill women and does so frequently. She also tacklehugglompsnuggleclings everyone she meets and likes and says "Nya~" in almost all her sentences. BackgroundHistory: During her childhood, Kei has always been compared to Nagase, the better twin. She was the girl, who was pink haired too, so, obligatory stupid too, and by definition to be ignored and brought down. At the academy, she wasn't Kei, she was "Nagase's sister" or "The copy-cat". Since then, she had been training hard to be like her brother all the time. Till she discovered her wasn't that great like she thought he was. Taunted by the girls of their own class, she understood he wasn't happy and perfect either. So, instead of wanting to beat him, she grew to support him. While she knew of her brothers sexual orientation and hatred for women, she helped him to cover his murders and entered by force his team, by killing one of the genin and covering it up. She kept imitating her brother, while learning secretly some genjutsus she found in scrolls. She came to love those techniques scarily and became a great expert in physical genjutsus and became able to become anyone she wanted to be, without making herself discovered. She grew to love "Giichi", her male appearance she kept almost all the time to help her brother to feel more at ease around her. Kei soon turned the age of 19 when he came across a jutsu unlike any she had seen nor has been seen since. A witch of sorts who dwelled within the mountain pass of the FireCrest mountain range had given it to her and her brother of her own free will. In return, they were to spend their days with the woman until she perished. The witch had cast this curse upon them knowing that they would be the end of her. Foreseeing her fate, she had known that this curse, unlike any others, would be the most painful. As the years passed, Kei and Nagase noticed their body did not age, they did not hunger or thirst. They were never tired nor did they ever feel restless. It was during this time that they trained his body in their own ways. His being the arts of ninjutsu and taijutsu, of which his skills have become supreme. Kei followed that path like a perfect copy, but also developping her genjutsu disguise skills. Within the first fifty years of his life, her family died off one by one. Unable to age, the villagers saw her and her brother as monsters and attempted to banish them from their realm. Kei and Nagase did not regret what was to come next, for they slaughtered almost each and every villager- men, women, and children alike. He left but one tired old man to tell the story of the village's downfall. She left the life of a little girl spared for the same goal. But also out of disgusting of all the blood that had to be shed for their own survival. This gave them the titles of "Sages of Aeon." Over the years, she discovered their major weakness in their perefect duo; themselves. Their blood had only to touch them to transform them into a red crystal and then to turn them into dust. It was then when Kei deceided that her main goal was to make her brother survive at any costs. People would say that Kei is trapped in her situation and is a cowardly person. She isn't. She chose to stay at the side of her brother, loving him more then anything else on the world even if he's the cause of the most misfortunes in her life. Shinobi RegistrationStyle: Ninjutsu, Weaponry Element(s): Primary ElementsEarth Wind Fire Combination ElementEarth and Wind - Dust Fire and Earth - Lava Village: The Abyss (event village) Rank: Jounin Clan: N/A Bloodline Trait: Eternity Flux Strengths: Extremely fast, unrivaled agility, astounding foresight, fast in reacting, and trained in the art of stealth. Weaknesses: The blood of Nagase, not specially strong, beats herself up for anything bad that happens to the people she appreciates. Equipment:* Pink sportive clothes (transformed into a blue outfit when under Giichi). * 15 barb tipped senbon (concealed beneath her clothing; in her sleeves). * Chakra Channeling Blade (carried by sling on her back). * 3 Tanto (various lengths - Strapped to her waist). * A medium sized pouch. (resting upon the hip). * 50 Chakra Disturbance Spikes (within pouch). * 15 Kunai (of various natures; within pouch). * 10 additional senbon (within pouch). * 5 summoning scrolls (within the pouch). * 1 Executioner's blade (summoned by a scroll). * 2 double sided scabards (summoned by a scroll). * 50 Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon (summoned by a scroll). * 15 exploding tags (summoned by a scroll) * 200 feet of chakra wire (summoned by a scroll). * Black boots that reaches her knees (with metallic plates on the sole and hidden knifes in the boots itself.) Fighting Techniques: Special Techniques: - Spoiler:
Name: Bachi no Naraku - Eternity's Curse Rank: Special (Event) Range: N/A Style: Ninjutsu Description: Bachi no Naraku is a technique taught to the two Sages of Aeon by an ancient witch. This technique is instantaneously learned by the transfer of life through the use of this technique. However, this technique does not kill its user. Rather, the technique takes away the user's seemingly immortal body. With this technique, the target is granted a body that will never age, deteriorate or change throughout the lifespan of the person. This will cause them never to hunger, thirst or grow tired as well. However, with these great abilities, is granted the accursed passing of time. Upon using this technique, the user will lose all powers attributed with the Eternity Flux Bloodline trait, but will gain the ability to age once more. Effectively allowing them to end their life. This technique can and will only be used upon the end of the event to those who managed to defeat a member of the Ikuhara twins. Afterword, of which, the ability to transfer this technique (as well as bloodline) will be erased.
S-rank - Spoiler:
Name: "Alluvion of Aeon." Rank: S Range: Short distance; 0-2 meters (0-6.5 feet). Style: Special Attack, Ninjutsu Description: Alluvion of Aeon has been seen as a sudden surge of chakra which is sent through the target's body manually (through direct contact), causing the target's internal organs to age rapidly to the point of death if not interrupted. This chakra is invasive and requires many years of medical ninjutsu training in order to use. When done properly, the opponent's organs will age and decay rapidly while their outside appearance remains untouched aside of a slight chakra burn at the point of contact.
Name: Bachi no Naraku - Eternity's Curse Rank: S Range: N/A Style: Ninjutsu Description: Bachi no Naraku is a technique taught to the two Sages of Aeon by an ancient witch. This technique is instantaneously learned by the transfer of life through the use of this technique. However, this technique does not kill its user. Rather, the technique takes away the user's seemingly immortal body. With this technique, the target is granted a body that will never age, deteriorate or change throughout the lifespan of the person. This will cause them never to hunger, thirst or grow tired as well. However, with these great abilities, is granted the accursed passing of time. Upon using this technique, the user will lose all powers attributed with the Eternity Flux Bloodline trait, but will gain the ability to age once more. Effectively allowing them to end their life.
A-rank - Spoiler:
Name: Sankaku Kadoguchi - Trigram Gateway Summon Rank: A Range: N/A Style: Ninjutsu. Description: Trigram Gateway Summon is a technique in which the user, dependent on their natural combat abilities, sends forth senbon created out of chakra into an open field. Upon entering the open field (battle area) they will seemingly stop in mid air and embed themselves on a dimensional wall where cracks shall form a triangular opening. From this opening shall spawn a monster of the user's preference. Three monsters have been witnessed in the past. One of which was a Chimera which rampaged in the valleys South of Thunder village where it devastated everything in its path with both Lightning and Fire based attacks. Another, a pterodactyl of monstrous speed and agility. This monster was seen in the abyss where it destroyed many a village with its wind based attacks. The third, and most terrifying of them all was a hydra. This nine headed serpent beast was seen in the oceans destroying merchant and military vessels alike. A great war effort was sent forth to destroy this mythological beast. However, it disappeared suddenly without a trace some odd years later.
Name: Noushuku Kaze Taihou - Concentrated Wind Battery Rank: A Range: Short-Long distance: 0-45 meters (0-147 feet). Style: Wind style, Ninjutsu Description: The Noushuku Kaze Taihou is a technique in which the user sends forth pressurized balls of wind element chakra. The user executes this technique by concentrating chakra in his or her hands as they are clamped together tightly. Soon thereafter the the chakra is pressurized immensely and is readied for firing. The user then outstretches their hands toward their intended target and releases the pressurized ball of chakra toward them. This technique can then be used in rapid succession, however the number of chakra balls is directly proportionate to the amount of time used in preparing this technique. Upon making contact with the intended target, the pressurized chakra balls cause a large scale explosion which is often times accompanied with debris particles from the object(s) the technique hits. The impact is said to cause deep lacerations to extremities nearby. In the event this technique makes contact with the intended target, often times it will cause the object (or person) to be torn in two. This of course depends on where the person is hit.
Name: Tsuchi Doragon no Dangan - Earth Dragon Projectile Rank: A Range: Medium-long distance; 11-50 meters (36-164 feet). Style: Earth/Fire Combination, Ninjutsu Description: Tsuchi Doragon no Dangan is a technique in which the user combines two different jutsu to form a more powerful offensive style attack. This is an attack in which the user combines Tsuchi Ryuudou no Taiga's river of mud with a fireball technique in order to send flaming balls of molten earth (or lava depending on the intensity of the fire technique used) at the user's intended target. Upon making contact with the target the molten fire balls are said to engulf and incinerate the object or person it touches.
Name: Shuriken Kage Bushin - Shuriken Shadow Clones Rank: A Range: Short-medium distance; 0-50 meters (0-164 feet). Style: Weapon style, Ninjutsu Description: The Shuriken Kage Bushin technique allows the user to create exact copies of a shuriken to attack an opponent. Upon releasing a shuriken which is infused with chakra, the user can then use this technique to replicate the shuriken while it is in the air on it's way to the intended target. This not only gives the user more chances to hit his or her opponent, but it will surprise his or her opponent at the sudden increasing numbers of shuriken.
Name: Hakke no Fuuin Shiki - Eight Trigrams Sealing Rank: A Range: Short distance; 0-1 meter (0-3 feet). Style: Sealing, Ninjutsu Description: Hakke no Fuuin Shiki is a technique in which the user seals an entity within an object or person. It consists of two four trigram seals which are used together to form a seal that allows chakra to flow steadily through it, while not disrupting the chakra flow (through or otherwise) of a person or object. This seal weakens over time and is often accompanied by a key which is drawn in the center of the seal.
B-rank - Spoiler:
Name: Katon Karyu Endan - Dragon Flame Missle Rank: B Range: Short-medium distance; 0-35 meters (0-115 feet). Style: Fire style, Ninjutsu Description: Katon Karyu Endan is a technique in which the user causes a sudden burst of flame to emanate from his or her mouth. The user first inhales while focusing chakra into their lungs. As they exhale a sudden jet of fire flows from their mouth continuously until both the air in the user's lungs and the chakra are used up. This technique is commonly used as a preemptive strike against an opponent. If the user is skilled in the use of this particular technique, the flames are said to glow a bright white color which provides the most intense flame.
Name: Senpuu Engetsutou - Whirlwind Scimitar Rank: B Range: Short distance; 0-2 meters (0-6.5 feet). Style: Wind style, Ninjutsu Description: The Senpuu Engetsutou technique is used in hand to hand combat as a surprise attack. While using normal weapons in combat is usual on the battle field, this curved edged blade is made entirely of elemental wind chakra which will allow for the user of this technique to gain an upper hand in battle. This technique, however, is also able to be combined with normal weaponry in that it can surround the blade so that it may cut through anothers defenses. This technique is efficient in cutting through solid objects quickly as well as other objects.
Name: Tsuchi Ryuudou no Taiga - Earth Flow River Rank: B Range: Medium-long distance; 11-50 meters (36-164 feet). Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu Description: Tsuchi Ryuudou no Taiga is a technique in which the user causes the surface of any terrain to change into that of mud. The user then uses his or her chakra to manipulate the direction of the mud river's current. This technique is primarily used in order to surprise an opponent as well as knock the intended target off balance. If used properly, this technique can sweep away the target in the sudden flow of liquid earth.
Name: Tsuchi Shouheki - Earthen Barrier Rank: B Range: Short distance; 0-10 meters (0-33feet). Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu Description: Tsuchi Shouheki is a technique in which the user creates a wall of mud that is used to prevent an attack from harming him or her. The user focuses his or her chakra into the stomach and releases the blast of chakra by producing a large amount of mud which then solidifies quickly, creating a wall of solid earth. However, this technique can also be used in order to inhibit another's movements by "boxing them in."
Name: Kage Bushin - Shadow Clone Rank: B Range: N/A Style: Ninjutsu Description: The Kage Bushin technique is similar to other cloning techniques in that it creates copies of the user. However, unlike normal cloning techniques, Kage Bushin creates solid copies of a person of which are indistinguishable from the original. In order to do this, however, the user must split up his or her chakra evenly amongst the clones, which will take a tole on those with small chakra reserves. These clones, though able to bleed, will disperse after one or two solid blows.
C-rank - Spoiler:
Name: Kasai Chakra Yaiba - Fiery Chakra Blade Rank: C Range: Short distance, 0-2 meters (0-6.5 feet) Style: Fire style, ninjutsu Description: Kasai Chakra Yaiba is a technique in which the user uses a blade made entirely of his or her elemental chakra. In the case of Kasai Chakra Yaiba, it is a fire element technique. In this technique the user forms a steady flow of chakra into his or her hand (left of right, depending on his or her preferences). This technique, however can be used simply to give the user an advantage by channeling the elemental chakra through a blade as well. This is said to add an effective melting force to the blade of which it is focused into, as well as allows the user to send off fiery waves of chakra outward at an opponent. These chakra waves, however, are not intense enough to cause serious burns, but will scold the user's opponent nonetheless.
Name: Kaen Sentou no Jutsu- Blazing Spire Technique Rank: C Range: Short-Long distance; 5-25 meters (16-82 feet) Style: Fire style, Ninjutsu Description: The Kaen Sentou technique is oftentimes used in order to fend off multiple targets at once. The height of the spire reaches a maximum length of about ten meters tall. However, due to the height of the spire, the flurry of fireballs cannot reach within five meters of the user due to the damage he or she would undoubtedly sustain. The user executes this jutsu by placing his/her hand onto the ground and sending his chakra directly downward. This causes a pillar of fire to shoot forth from the ground in front of them. This jutsu is not movable, rather one can create multiple of them to act as sentries. However the more of them in use, the shorter the duration is that they can remain in use. Caution is to be taken with this jutsu, if the user is not experienced with it, he/she will easily be harmed in it's execution. This technique is often used by a vanguard in order to buy time for his/her companions.
Name: Nenshou Hageshii Kusuguru - Fiery Tempestous Sickle Rank: C Range: Short-Medium distance: 0-20 meters (0-65 feet). Style: Wind and Fire style combination, Ninjutsu Description: The Nenshou Hageshii Kusuguru technique is used in a similar fashion to throwing kunai. However, in this technique the user sends forth c recant shaped blades of fiery, yet blusterous winds. These crescent shaped blades are pressurized and incredibly sharp with an intense temperature. The user is limited to sending out one sickle per movement, however. This is in part due to the movement involved and to their length which is roughly one meter wide. Upon making contact with their intended target they are said to explode outward causing a small scale burst of invasive chakra outward. This technique is known to send fiery hot shrapnel outward after hitting certain objects such as a tree or rock.
Name: Hageshii Kusuguru - Tempestuous Sickle Rank: C Range: Short-Medium distance; 0-20 meters (0-65 feet). Style: Wind style, Ninjutsu Description: The Hageshii Kusuguru technique is used in a similar fashion to throwing kunai. However, in this technique the user sends forth crescent shaped blades of blusterous winds. These crescent shaped blades are pressurized and incredibly sharp. The user is limited to sending out two sickles per movement, however. This is in part due to the movement involved and to their length which is roughly one meter wide. Upon making contact with their intended target they are said to explode outward causing a small scale burst of invasive chakra outward. This technique is known to send shrapnel outward after hitting certain objects such as a tree or rock.
Name: Hageshii no Kaze - Violent Wind Rank: C Range: Short-medium distance; 1-45 meters, (3-147 feet) Style: Wind syle, Ninjutsu Description: Hageshii no Kaze is a simple technique that sends a gust of concentrated wind at the opponent. The gust originating from the user's palm. A concentrated gust of wind is released from the palm of the user in a narrow path of roughly 2 feet from close range. However as the gust leaves 5 feet of the user, it widens to about 32 feet. This is to maximize the width, but the farther it expands outward, the weaker the concentration of chakra and the less damage it is capable of doing to an opponent.
Name: Kaze no Tufuu - Wind Tornado Rank: C Style: Wind style, Ninjutsu Range: Short-medium distance, 10-20 meters (32-64 feet). Description: The user of Kaze no Tufuu is to create a tornado of sorts as he or she fuses his or her chakra into the surrounding air. He or she then begins to spin as a large tornado forms. As the tornado's current becomes stronger the user would then send it spinning toward his or her target as he or she exits by using it's current as a source of lift to send him or her in and out of the funnel. If the target is hit directly with this technique, he or she will become disoriented, though this technique does not have any uses for damaging the foe, it will leave them stunned and open to an additional attack.
Name: Kawari Shuriken - Tile Shuriken Rank: C Range: Short-medium distance; 0-25 meters (0-82 feet). Style: Weapon style, Ninjutsu Description: Kawari Shuriken is a technique in which the user can manipulate tiles from nearby buildings and structures and use them as an offensive weapon. It is a technique similar to that of manipulating attack blades so that the tiles rotate in a way that it becomes incredibly sharp. In addition to manipulating the direction and speed of the tiles, the user can infuse them with chakra to increase the density making them far stronger than normal tiles.
Name: Doryuusoo - Stone Spears Rank: C Range: Short-medium distance; 0-20 meters (0-65 feet) Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu Description: In the Doryuusoo technique the user attempts to impale his or her targets using spearlike projectiles which emerge from the earthen surroundings at his or her target. In this technique, the user condenses mud or soil in such a way that it can be used to shoot forth from the ground below or to the side of a target in an attempt to gore them. However, these spikes cannot penetrate objects of greater density.
Name: Tsuchi Bushin - Earth Clone Rank: C Range: N/A Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu Description: Tsuchi Bushin is a technique in which is similar to other cloning techiniques in that it creates copies of the user. However, unlike normal cloning techniques, Tsuchi Bushin creates a solid copie of the user which is almost indestinguisable from the original. This clone, unlike the shadow clone, can retake it's original form after being hit with significant force due to it consisting of mud.
Name: Dochuu Eigyo - Underground Projection Rank: C Range: N/A Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu Description: Similar to the Moguragakure technique, this jutsu sends it's user underneath the surface of the ground using earthen elemental chakra. By utilizing his or her earth style chakra he or she will be able to stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the topsoil around them.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza (Act of Water Surface Walking) Rank: C Range: None Style:Ninjutsu Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Name: Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing) Rank: C Range: None Style: Ninjutsu Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.
D-rank D-rank - Spoiler:
Name: Hinotama - Fireball Rank: D Range: Short-medium distance; 0-15 meters (0-49 feet). Style: Fire style, Ninjutsu Description: Hinotama is a technique in which the user focuses his or her fire element chakra within a hand or other appendage. This fireball is considered extremely hot, and can sear flesh and cause extreme burns. However, after being released from the body, it looses heat rather quickly and is considered as an ineffective attack. However, if combined with short range taijutsu or ninjutsu, this technique can be considered a perk when added to a kick, punch, or other technique. Usually, this technique is used in order to heat senbon, kunai, and other metal objects of similar uses in order to add a more painful effect to the weapon.
Name: Kage Shuriken - Shadow Shuriken Rank: D Range: Short-medium distance; 0-20 meters (0-64 feet). Style: Weapon Style Description: The Kage Shuriken technique is a basic skill for many Shinobi in which the user throws multiple shuriken in such a way that the first weapon hides the subsequent one(s) by blocking it (or them, depending on how many are thrown) from the opponent's line of sight. From the user's opponent's view it would appear as if only one shuriken was thrown.
Name: Hitoshirezu no Hokori - Hidden Dust Rank: D Range: Short-medium distance; 1-25 meters, (0 - 82 feet) Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu Description: The Hitoshirezu no Hokori is a cloud of dust which envelops the surrounding area in a dense cloud, reducing visibility within the affected area. The density can be controlled by the user, allowing them to create a fog-like cloud so thick that even they cannot see through it. The dust particles are infused with the chakra of the user, which can possibly block users, that visualize other chakra with a doujutsu. As the cloud hits the range of 25 feet, it begins to appearing to fade off at that distance.
Name: Shinjuu Zanshu - Head Hunter Rank: D Range: Short distance; 0-1 meter (0-3 feet). Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu Description: Shinjuu Zanshu is a technique in which the user attempts to capture his or her opponent by submerging their target's body beneath the soil. The user, emerging from the area just below his or her target, pulls the opponent down so that only it's head is visable from the surface. This technique is used in order to restrain a target so that he or she may be decapitated, or tortured.
Name: Chakra no Kaisan - Chakra Disolution Rank: D Range: Short-medium distance. 0-15 meters (0-49 feet). Style: Fire element; Earth Element; Wind Element, Ninjutsu Description: Chakra no Kaisan is a technique in which the user focuses and channels his or her chakra into a medium such as a staff or sword. The users chakra then is spread evenly throughout the object and is expelled at the users disposal. This technique requires the user to send his or her own chakra into it, therefore costing the user chakra. Those who are more experienced with this technique will be able to use it remotely, however during the early stages it must be confined to being connected directly with a chakra source on the body. Not only does this restrict the users range distance, but it effects how he or she will fight and which area they hold it. This is usually the hands, feet or other areas where the item can be held.
Name: Hidden Voice - Rank: D Range: N/A Style: Disguise Genjutsu; none elemental Description: Hidden Voice is a genjutsu with which the user can perfectly disguise it's voice. The advantge of this genjutsu is that people with special bloodlines that can be used against genjutsus can't discover it, because the chakra works directly in the user's vocal cords, which forces it's consitution to transform slightly and make the voice pitch higher or lower at will.
Name: Hidden Face - Rank: D Range: N/A Style: Disguise Genjutsu; none elemental Description: Hidden Face is a genjutsu with which the user can perfectly disguise it's face. The advantage of this genjutsu is that people with a special bloodlines that can be used against genjutsus can't discover it, because the chakra words directly in the user's face muscles, cartilage, bones and hair, which forces it's constituation to change and make the face of the user look different at will. The backside of this genjutsu is that it takes around 30 seconds to change from a face to another and that it's hurts when it's used too often. It's recommended to use a simple transformation jutsu when the transformation has only to be of short term.
Name: Hidden Hands - Rank: D Range: N/A Style: Disguise Genjutsu; none elemental Description: Hidden Hands is a genjutsu with which the user can perfectly disuguise it's hands. The advantage of this genjutsu is that people with a special bloodlines that can be used against genjutsus can't discover it, because the chakra words directly in the user's hands, making it's chemical constituation, finger prints and form change. The backside of this genjutsu is that it takes around 30 seconds to change from a face to another and that it's hurts when it's used too often. It's recommended to use a simple transformation jutsu when the transformation has only to be of short term.
Name: Hidden Eyes - Rank: D Range: N/A Style: Disguise Genjutsu; none elemental Description: Hidden Eyes is a genjutsu with which the user can perfectly disuguise it's eyes. The advantage of this genjutsu is that people with a special bloodlines that can be used against genjutsus can't discover it, because the chakra words directly in the user's hands, making it's color, form and iris ring. The backside of this genjutsu is that it takes around 30 seconds to change from a face to another and that it's hurts when it's used too often. It's recommended to use a simple transformation jutsu when the transformation has only to be of short term.
E-rank - Spoiler:
Name: Bushin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Range: N/A Style: Ninjutsu Description: The Clone Technique has been the foundation to academy level jutsu across the globe. In this jutsu the user is to create several intangible copies of oneself. This jutsu is especially for covert missions into enemy territory as well as distracting or confusing enemies on the battlefield. However, when a copy is hit with a sufficient amount of force or poisoned, it will disperse immediately.
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Replacement Technique Rank: E Range: N/A Style: Ninjutsu Description: The Replacement Technique has been used in many a sticky situation. Shinobi have been known to use it in order to dodge anothers attack as well as to serve as a distraction to help evade them in and off the battlefield. This jutsu is comprised of a swift action, usually replacing oneself with a nearby object or person so that they can evade an attack, or avoid being found.
Name: Konbi Henge - Transformation Technique Rank: E Range: N/A Style: Ninjutsu Description: The Transformation Technique is primarily used in order to transform oneself into another person, animal, or object. This is a great asset to a person who is attempting to go undercover, provided that they can do a flawless transformation, that is. However, sloppy transformations can often times lead to a Shinobi's downfall. Relationships: Abyss members Family: Nagase Ikuhara - Twin brother. | |
| | | Kei Ikuhara
Posts : 17 Points : 22 Join date : 2010-04-05
| Subject: Re: Kei Ikuhara Tue Apr 06, 2010 6:40 am | |
| Meet Nagase's partner, Kei~ | |
| | | Arashi Hisoka
Posts : 15 Points : 25 Join date : 2010-04-03
| Subject: Re: Kei Ikuhara Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:42 pm | |
| Ok was asked to look this over a bit and I will point out my problems with it.
First off, I will start with I like everything till bloodline, since there is no application filed. Second one thing disturbs me. You can only die by each others blood and severe damage (heart and brain pretty much have to be removed), this seems a bit oped for a bloodline even for event characters. Even Hidan in his invincability from the following of his religion had weaknesses based on the fact he had very few jutsus, but here you have a full battery and pretty much invincible and I would need a definition of never tiring, I hope that means sleep and not chakra also (though I doubt you would do that but I dont see a description of what the never tiring applies to so need to be certain). Another thing is that I am concerned over, is after reading your application is then I begin to think of your brohers even more. You did put your own personal weaknesses to it (aka. Though smarter acts like your brother instead and since your weaker physically your attacks wont be as strong) but then what weaknesses has Negase have then to weaken this bloodline, and all I can come up with is not much.
Next jutsus. I know you used copy paste jutsus but there is a couple I question. Name: Dochuu Eigyo - Underground Projection Rank: C Range: N/A Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu Description: Similar to the Moguragakure technique, this jutsu sends it's user underneath the surface of the ground using earthen elemental chakra. By utilizing his or her earth style chakra he or she will be able to stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the topsoil around them.
what is the range on this. If you are going to use this jutsu we need a range. I would recommend using Kisame's version instead.
Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage Rank: C Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m) Type: Attack, Supplementary Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Kisame can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. By extending his Samehada above ground, he gives off the appearance of a shark travelling underground.
You could of course eliminate the sword above surface part of course.
Another problem Name: Senpuu Engetsutou - Whirlwind Scimitar Rank: B Range: Short distance; 0-2 meters (0-6.5 feet). Style: Wind style, Ninjutsu Description: The Senpuu Engetsutou technique is used in hand to hand combat as a surprise attack. While using normal weapons in combat is usual on the battle field, this curved edged blade is made entirely of elemental wind chakra which will allow for the user of this technique to gain an upper hand in battle. This technique, however, is also able to be combined with normal weaponry in that it can surround the blade so that it may cut through anothers defenses. This technique is efficient in cutting through solid objects quickly as well as other objects.
and
Name: Kasai Chakra Yaiba - Fiery Chakra Blade Rank: C Range: Short distance, 0-2 meters (0-6.5 feet) Style: Fire style, ninjutsu Description: Kasai Chakra Yaiba is a technique in which the user uses a blade made entirely of his or her elemental chakra. In the case of Kasai Chakra Yaiba, it is a fire element technique. In this technique the user forms a steady flow of chakra into his or her hand (left of right, depending on his or her preferences). This technique, however can be used simply to give the user an advantage by channeling the elemental chakra through a blade as well. This is said to add an effective melting force to the blade of which it is focused into, as well as allows the user to send off fiery waves of chakra outward at an opponent. These chakra waves, however, are not intense enough to cause serious burns, but will scold the user's opponent nonetheless.
Read these two...I know a site says there rank but realistically they are almost the exact same jutsu, except one is wind and the other is fire. Both of course would have different effects due to the element involved. Plus I would say having a melting and scolding effect is just as strong as winds cutting through defense. So I would say we need a ruling on whether these should be C-rank jutsus or B-rank jutsus permanently.
After posting this I realized what account I am on XD This is moderator Chojiro and to lazy at the moment to repost under my moderator account. | |
| | | Asako Kabuki
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| Subject: Re: Kei Ikuhara Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:02 am | |
| o-o erm...We're physically even strong. But, I'm a copy of my brother, not really my own individual in battle. O.o so, I got a huge weakness there, since I've not really my own will. Other major weakness I have is Nagase's blood. o-o one drop, and the place where it touched becomes crystal dust and if I can't cut it off, in the next minute, Kei is no more. Same for Nagase, even if he doesn't know that. Last weakness of mine is more a mental weakness. If anything bad happens to any people I know and/or like, I beat myself up. Which means distracted in battle or a higher agressivity level which will make me take actions which won't be thought out.
o-o about the jutsus. That's Dante's job xD Ask him about it~ ^^;
(e-e PS: I'm too lazy to log in my other account too) | |
| | | Ojike Zetsubou
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| Subject: Re: Kei Ikuhara Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:21 am | |
| e.e I'm going to say this and say it once.
The reason Kasai Chakra Yaiba is a C-rank is that it has a lesser effect. It will cause burns, but won't have the ability to incinerate where as the other. The Senpuu Engetsutou is used to cut through solid objects directly. Melting an object takes much more time than that of pressurized razor sharp wind. It's obvious that it would take finer chakra control to use Senpuu Engetsutou than it would Kasai Chakra Yaiba.
Senpuu Engetsutou, however, is the sudden, violent channeling of wind element chakra in order to take an opponent by surprise. This is indeed a higher rank technique in that it is not constant.
All in all, Senpuu Engetsutou's attack has a more effective damage ratio than that of the Kasai Chakra Yaiba. e.e Don't ever think I haven't thought these things through, lacky~ *noms* | |
| | | Inuzuka Chojiro
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| Subject: Re: Kei Ikuhara Wed Apr 07, 2010 9:53 am | |
| Um first I disagree about both of those you need to read the fire one in more detail, of course adding wind element is going to make a blade sharper that is the nature of the element, that said fire is going to burn so thus your point is null and void.
Serious burns serves as a distraction and limiting of the area that is burned plus the jutsu specifically says it melts objects it comes in contact with. Thus destroying weapons and armor, I would think that would put it on par with the wind scimitar.
The other issue you have not adressed is this one.
Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage Rank: C Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m) Type: Attack, Supplementary Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Kisame can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. By extending his Samehada above ground, he gives off the appearance of a shark travelling underground.
I think you should use this jutsu in stead of:
Name: Dochuu Eigyo - Underground Projection Rank: C Range: N/A Style: Earth style, Ninjutsu Description: Similar to the Moguragakure technique, this jutsu sends it's user underneath the surface of the ground using earthen elemental chakra. By utilizing his or her earth style chakra he or she will be able to stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the topsoil around them.
This one since, this is way to Oped. I mean come on, it has no limiter to how long one can stay under ground. It has no limit to how far you can move. It is just way to over powered. | |
| | | Arashi Hisoka
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| Subject: Re: Kei Ikuhara Wed Apr 07, 2010 3:05 pm | |
| I hope he switches the eart travel jutsu
but Approved~ | |
| | | Asako Kabuki
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| Subject: Re: Kei Ikuhara Wed Apr 07, 2010 3:05 pm | |
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