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PostSubject: Lucian   Lucian Icon_minitimeMon May 24, 2010 1:17 pm

Name: Lucian
Alias: Fudōtoku na Romanchikku kage
Explanation behind Alias:
He is an immoral romatic person that seems like a shadow. He walks quietly and runs fast. He like romance stuff even though he likes death and immortal things.
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Height: 6'4''
Body Type: Muscular
Weight: 155lbs

Appearance:
Lucian has black shiney soft hair that's short but not too short. His dark red eyes gleam with mysterious things. He wears his red shirt when hes around people in villages acting "normal". His jacket tied to his waist and wears some-what baggy jeans. Lucian has some deep cuts that show some red.

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Personality:
He's mostly cold and sometimes full of hatered. He dislikes people and keeps his distance apart from others unless it's nessesary. He always thinks that he'll never fall in love but theres aways hope for him. He also can be romantic and loveing but only to one woman. He just hopes his luck isnt as bad as his past family. The one thing he will do is protect anything that becomes special to him.
When he taste blood he can get a little psyco and strong. He sacrifices to become immortaly and is obssesed with things that are immortal. He gets pissed when he sees couples hugging and loveing each other, till he has his own. He hates people that woo girls and go to more then one girl for things. He would kill any he wanted to and doesnt much care for things.
Likes: Blood, dark color roses,moon and stars with the night,
Dislikes: Liars,plaiers and yello
Habits: Reading and walking at night

Background

History:

Birth: Naicul left Heaven and ran to Eruption when he turned 18 years old. Later and years he wanted to be married and be happy. He left and went back to heaven and sat by the tree and saw a woman with white clothes and dark hair and he got up took her away from the Village of Heaven. Four years later the woman feel in love with Naicul anyways and had a child named Lucian Renachi. Lucian was Naicul backwords and Lucian reminded Naicul of himself when he was younger but his mother didnt die during birth thank god to them. Lucian became a great happy kid. His mother telling stories about how she was tooken but feel inlove later with his father and how brave he was. Also how his father and his grandfather both found love at the same area and went there to take her away Lucian looked up to his father. Lucian turned 6 years old and he came home to suprise. There was blood on the floor and then he tracked it down and saw his mothers body and his father skinned. There was a man by him and Lucian looked up at the man with his eyes. He noticed that this man did this to his parents. Lucians eyes turned cold,dark and full of hatered. He looked up at his forehead and saw the blood run though. He concentraited more on it and then he heard the man scream in pain about his forehead and exploded. After that he got his stuff and ran and is the only one in the clan.

The middle of a new life: He lived in a random part of the forest inside of a huge brick house. The owner died right before he came and desided to live there since it's dark and middle of no where. He didn't mind being alone or any of that, he just thought it was always quiet. Lucian trained himself jutsus and ways to stay alive. He hauntd for his own food and killed and sacrificed his prey. He read and then he got an idea that he should travel places and write himself a book about his travels too make things interesting. He packed the important things and left the rest behind till he comes back from his travels and hopefully brings someone with him. Lucian first was going to travel to thunder. He heard that his grandfather lived there. He walked his way up to the path and spotted somethings and wrote them down. He fought thiefs and more but he then saw a man that seem older then him. The man looked at him and had a shoke look on his face. Lucian then notice the man in the shadows when he killed his partner for killing Lucians parents. The unknown man left and vanished after saying "I'll come back for you...". Lucian glared at the path that the man dissapeared at and promised himself that he would kill him once he find him. Even though he's a missing ninja of the unknown and can't let no one know who he is. Not even the woman that he may find.


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Style: Ninjutsu, Weaponry
Element(s): (Post Primary and Combination elements below. There is a maximum of two primary elements and one combination element at this time)

Primary Elements

Fire and blood.

Combination Element

Ice

Village: None
Rank: Missing ninja
Clan: Renaichi
Bloodline Trait: Some immortality,dark hair and dark colored eyes such as dark red,black, blue and ect.
Strengths: Both combat fighting techniques,darkness seeing and speed
Weaknesses: love,long boring conversations, his anger.

Equipment:

(Here's where you post your items. Go ahead and place them after the bolded asterix in list form. Also include where they are in relation to your body and outfit.)

* Sacrifice small Katana
* Jacket/clothes


Fighting Techniques:

Name: Blooden or vein

Type ninjutsu

Element: blood

rank: B

Description: He may use his eye technique and see through the persons veins and blood flows. He can control them for certian amounts of time and also stop a blood flow. He could also use it as if the blood was a form of a liveing organism.

Ice Prison Technique

•Name: Hyōrō no Jutsu, literally "Ice Prison Technique", English "Ice Prison Jutsu"
•Rank- C
Element: Ice
Description: This jutsu creates pillars of ice crystals that home in on an opponent and trap them in ice. Unlike the Water Prison Technique, no further action seems to be required to maintain the prison once the victim is caught. This jutsu may also be used defensively as a wall of ice.

Ice Release: Black Dragon Outburst Snowstorm

•Name: Hyōton: Kokuryū Bōfusetsu, "Ice Release: Black Dragon Outburst Snowstorm", English "Ice Style: Black Dragon Blizzard"
•Type: Ninjutsu
•Rank: S
DEscrition: This jutsu creates an icy black dragon with red eyes that is shot towards the opponent. Doto has an improved version that creates two black dragons that attack the enemy by creating a freezing tornado



Ice Release: One-Horned White Whale

•Name: Hyōton: Itsukaku Hakugei, 氷遁・一角白鯨, literally "Ice Release: One-Horned White Whale" or "Ice Release: Narwhal White Whale", English "Ice Style: Ice Whale Jutsu"
•Type: Ninjutsu
•Rank: A
Description: This jutsu fashions a massive narwhal from surrounding ice that jumps up and falls back down on the opponent. Though made entirely from inanimate ice, the beast releases a loud echoing moan as it rises.



Ice Release: Piercing Dragon Fierce Tiger

•Name: Hyōton: Haryū Mōko,"Ice Release: Piercing Dragon Fierce Tiger", English "Ice Style: Tiger Pierces Dragon"
•Type: Ninjutsu
•Rank: C
Description: This jutsu creates a large tiger out of nearby ice. Because it's so cold, it can freeze nearby water while attacking its target. It resembles an ice version of Water Release: Water Dragon Blast Technique.


Ice Release: Swallow Snow Storm

•Name: Hyōton: Tsubame Fubuki, "Ice Release: Swallow Snow Storm"
•Type: Unknown
•Rank: B
Description: This jutsu creates a cluster of ice needles in the shape of miniature swallows, which the user then throws at the opponent. These needles can change direction in midair and will maim the opponent with their sharp wings.


Ice Release: Twin Dragon Outburst Snowstorm

•Name: Hyōton: Sōryū Bōfūsetsu,"Ice Release: Twin Dragon Outburst Snowstorm", English "Twin Dragon Blizzard"
•Type: Unknown
•Rank: A
Description: An advanced version of Ice Release: Black Dragon Outburst Snowstorm in which he releases two dragons of black snow that merge into a massive tornado.


Ice Release: Wolf Fang Avalanche Technique

•Name: Hyōton: Rōga Nadare no Jutsu, , "Ice Release: Wolf Fang Avalanche Technique" ), English "Ice Style: Wolf-Fang Avalanche Jutsu"
•Type: Ninjutsu
•Rank: A
Element: Ice
DEscription:This jutsu creates an avalanche of snow wolves that run towards the opponent, biting and crushing their foe.


Relationships: None for now.
Family: They were killed.
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PostSubject: Re: Lucian   Lucian Icon_minitimeTue May 25, 2010 2:52 pm

what rank missing ninja are you? S,A,B,C or D?
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PostSubject: Re: Lucian   Lucian Icon_minitimeTue May 25, 2010 2:57 pm

This char is disapproved to me for now
I would like the immortal spell be removed and plus ice release already belongs to a clan, you would have to sepcifically how exactly you earn it. As well blood element belongs to a clan and is not allow for anyone else outside of the clan.
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PostSubject: Re: Lucian   Lucian Icon_minitimeTue May 25, 2010 3:06 pm

There is a few more issues with this application.

First there is you combination element. Wind and water make ice not blood and fire. Second last I checked blood element needed a special approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Lucian   Lucian Icon_minitimeTue May 25, 2010 3:58 pm

Asako speaking, I'm a mod too on this site~

Also...being immortal is something you need a special permission for.
Plus...your weaknesses aren't really weaknesses v_v just flaws. Also, all of your elements are elements for which you need special permission and as far as I know we don't accept blood element.

Anyways. I'd reccomend you to read the rules that concerns bloodlines, jutsus and ranks correctly and modifie your profile while following the templates and such.

If you have any questions, please contact a member of the staff~
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