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Sairento E. Kouseitan'i
Posts : 7 Points : 9 Join date : 2010-05-24
| Subject: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Mon May 24, 2010 1:54 pm | |
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Name: Sairento Elite Kouseitan'i Alias: Berserker Explanation behind Alias: With his ablities he sometimes desides to ram through things, with his power and strength he never been beaten when it came to running in with the goal to destroy anything in its path.
Gender: Male Age: 15 Height: 6''2 Body Type: Muscular Weight: 122 lb
Appearance: Looks: Head:On his head he has long and beautiful hair.He use his hair in battle in all kinds of ways.He doesn't wear any of that pirecing or ear rings.He has no scars on his face.Just a plain face.Although girls find him cute.He has no marks or scratchs.He has good tone and none pale skin.
Body:On his arms he have no markings.His skin is toned.He is a very flexible and musular boy,or some say teenager.He once in a while wears gauntlets.The gauntlets increase his punching power by sending a static force into his opponent when connects with his opponent.But he only wears them once in a while.He wears a black Samurai like shirt.
Legs:His legs are normal legs.Although he trained them to be one of the most deadly weapon of all.At first glance it may seem like normal legs.But when he starts using them you can't eacape his fury.but he wears black samurai like pants.They are very light on him.
Other stuff:well he doesn't have anything other then seals.They are weapon seals,when using his chakra he can activate them to summon any weapon he already has.The seals have ALOT of space.And he normaly have his spear and sword on it.He is about 6'0 in height and 121 lb in weight.
Personality: When he was very young the traveling he was doing didn't confuse him but more like he just went with it.He did not ask why.Maybe once.But other then that he was just a normal quiet boy.But during the time he became a very (at times) hatefull person.He can hate at almost any time.He is not afraid to kill anyone,he does not fear darkness.He is when no one is bothering him one of the most quiet in the world.Unless something interest him,annoys him,bothers him or what not to new people he never meet.He IS a perv.Its in his blood of a Kouseitan'i.Being a Hero is not something that he desiree,But if it comes down to it he'll try.But he's not that good at it.Around kages he shows respect.When fighting or anywhere he speaks on how the Kouseitan'i are very powerfull.
Likes: Absorbing,Fighting, New techniques Dislikes: Senjus,Sages,People Habits: Quite,silent,Reakless
Background
History: Sairento was born into the Kouseitan'i clan.His great father was none other then the great Tsumi Kouseitan'i,His mother Takimeshi Kaguya.Like alot of his cousins and siblings,he was born during the great ninja war.He remember him and his family always traveling.So Sairento never had a chance to make actually friends.He remembers also them hiding him.And he watched them fight ninja's,and afterwards them taking him and them all running and getting away from ninjas.After Sairento turned 6 they were able to find a hidden temple under the sand village.There they stole books and scrolls,and brought them down to the temple.No one knew that they were there.Sairento did not understand why were they stacking stuff.He thought it was all useless junk.
When he turned 7,they began teaching him the way of the ninja,the world and everything else that was needed to know about surviving in the world.He learned all his little Academy jutsu quickly,they taught him things when he wanted to.And he choose to work almost all day everyday.And he mastered the academy jutsu in one month.And after realizing that the boy was not at a academy level they desided to push it up the training alittle bit.He keep training in everything but hand-to-hand combat.For some strange reason his mother told him not to train in that.And he just agreed and keep training and praticing his running skills around the underground area.But at the age of 10,the parents noticed something different about him,He had a much larger chakra level then others.
Sairento was rapidly getting stronger.He and his family soon enough was found underground and realizing that there son was training and they would not tolerate theif.But when Sairento's parents introdoce themself they reconsidered and made a deal.That they would be able to live inside the sand village,as Suna Ninja,and Sairento could be able to go to ninja academy.They accepted,and shortly after they were given a house.A pretty big house.And life for Sairento was great.But then again being actually inside of the village and not underground was something that he was not use to but he somehow got through it. At the academy he stayed away from windows,he would always do his work and he would tell what the students what they would be doing and it seems to once in a while piss of the academy instructer.One day he was walking home one night after spending his allowance on dumplings.And one of his teachers made a attempt to attack him.He ran not understanding what was happening.But his speed was incredible,he could bearly keep up with him.But when he got him in a tight spot Sairento jumped off the wall and kicked his teacher in the chest knocking him out.Apperently a ANBU black ops saw the whole thing,and told his parents before he got home.And when he made it home.His parents were proud but very glad he made it home.And from that point on they desided to teach him all the ways of combat.But the next day he arrived at school and they were throwing a party for him.He did not understand but he knew when his kage and parents were there holding a sand village head band.He greatuated from academy that day.
Gennin arc:
He was the number 6 rookie.Because he choose not to show his full power to anyone,even his parents didn't know what he was really capable of.But his parents still loved him all the same.And they noticed that Sairento was very different then the others.He was able to climb, run,jump and all other stuff that other gennin couldn't do.He trained hard,and getting alot of props from ninjas from his village.His parents bought him something that he learned to use well.A all black sword.He at first did not use it.He was just interested in what it looked like.And soon enough he began swinging with it.And got the hang of it.He began training in his sword ways mixed with kicks and punchs.But He signed up for a gennin tornament.And he praticed hard.His father quickly tryed teaching him Fire style jutsu,He learned them but that was not the element he wanted.But he trained and got well in the Katon Element.When the time came when he had to fight,they all realized that it was to many gennin so they made it a team battle.This was a secert tornament but his family knew.And allowed him to do it so long as he doesn't get caught.So they gave him a mask and told him to keep it on no matter what.He did exacly what they said.
when the tornament started it was a task to capture another gennin.And the first five would advance to the next stage.This was only to decrease the number of gennin in there fighting part.Sairento already knew who,what and how he was going to complete it.He used ninja wire and captured them.He was second to another ninja.this ninja was Sengei kono.Sairento knew he was the number 1 rookie.Second trail was to eascape a the jounin following you and get to the finish line.Alot of gennin were caught by the same trick,but Sairento was different.He was easily able to lose the jounin after him.But still Sengei was ahead of him.This pissed him off.He faced a emotion that he had never faced before.Hate.He hated him for the simple reason that he was the best but for some strange reason he was always better.
The last part was the Fighting tornament.He was very glad he made it to the final round,he was also was waiting for his chance to see what Sengei could really do.One night he snuck out of his house to walk around the village,and saw a jounin praticing Raiton Release.The Young Kouseitan'i talk to the jounin who was a woman.She took a interest in him and that same night taught him the Raiton Element.She was shocked to see not only he was able to master them but he was able to completely control it.She looked after him after that and the week after it was fighting time.He fought through everybody but in the end he stood face to face with Sengei.It wasn't a "I hope you fight well"No It was a glare and "I'm going to Kill you" that came out of the Young Kouseitan'i.The fight raged on and in the end Sairento had the tip of his blade to the boys throat,but his eyes were different he had activated.Declaring Sairento the winner.All of a sudden ANBU swarmed him And the Kage appeared yet again.And Handed out a vest.Saying he made it to Chuunin.
Shinobi Registration
Style: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu Element(s):
Primary Elements Raiton:Lightning Darkness: Dark Combination Element
Village: Thunder Rank: Chuunin Clan: Kouseitan'i-Kaguya Bloodline Trait: Bone path Corpse Strengths: hand-to-hand,Raw Power, destruction Weaknesses: -
Equipment:Normal amount of Ninja tools Fighting Techniques: -
Relationships: Inatzu-Friend Family: Whole Kouseitan'i is his family, In this fourm Akane Kouseitan'i is Emaneryu Kouseitan'i Daughter meaning is Sairento Cousin.
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| | | Sairento E. Kouseitan'i
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| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Mon May 24, 2010 2:52 pm | |
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| | | Sairento E. Kouseitan'i
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| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Tue May 25, 2010 5:16 pm | |
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| | | Sairento E. Kouseitan'i
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| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Wed May 26, 2010 8:16 am | |
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| | | Uchiha Serou
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| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Thu May 27, 2010 5:13 am | |
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| | | Sairento E. Kouseitan'i
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| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Thu May 27, 2010 7:47 am | |
| I'll make a List In the Jutsu Registration Unless its asked to do it here. | |
| | | Uchiha Serou
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| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Fri May 28, 2010 12:15 am | |
| If its Canon jutsus, post here but I think made up one are allowed too.. | |
| | | Sairento E. Kouseitan'i
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| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Fri May 28, 2010 7:47 am | |
| Name: Body Flicker Rank: D Element: - Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and their intended destination. Shisui Uchiha was feared as "Shisui of the Body Flicker" (ugフVXC, Shunshin no Shisui), likely referring to this technique.
The Body Flicker Technique has various variations among the different hidden villages, all of which involve some extra element aside from the movement itself. The extra element is usually some sort of substance used to distract the opponent, such as leaves or sand. Gaara, for instance, uses the Sand Body Flicker, which uses sand to cover his movements. Other varieties include the Mist Body Flicker, Water Body Flicker, and Leaf Body Flicker.
Name: Substitution Rank: E Element: None Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
The anime has a number of other objects being used for this jutsu, such as a boulder, mud, a scarecrow, and even a large rolled-up carpet. These items are usually nowhere in sight, suggesting that they are merely gags meant to lighten up the situation and not an actual part of the jutsu. Additionally, the normal practice of switching places with a section of log is done in several places that have no such thing anywhere nearby.
This technique is sometimes referred to as the Art of Projection in other manga and anime series.
Name: Escaping Skill Rank: E Element: None Description: This is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows teh ninja to escape from rope binds.
Name: Transformation Jutsu Rank: E Element: None Description: This is a Ninjutsu technique that everyone learns at the ninja academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or trick their opponents.
Name: Release Rank: E Element: None Description: This jutsu allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Tree Climbing Rank: - Element: None Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.
Name: Water Walking Rank: - Element: None Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Name: Waterfall Running Rank: - Element: None Description: A variation of the Tree Climbing and Water Walking exercises. The Waterfall Running technique is a combination of Tree Climbing and Water Walking. The user combines both teachings of the first two chakra control exercises in order to run up a waterfall. ====================================== Name: Finger Bullet Drill Rank: C Elemental Affinity: - Description: This is a jutsu that utilizes the Kaguya's domince over their skeletal system, hardening the bones before release. Using the ability to phase, the Kaguya will send their phalanges bones through the tips of their fingers, in a projectile motion. As they are moving, they also will spin in a clock-wise manner, capable of peircing flesh. The tips of the fingers arent damaged, as the bones simply phase through the skin on the tips. After the bones leave the body, the Kaguya is able to quickly regrow their Phalanges back to their original state.
Name: Dance of the Camellia Rank: D Elemental Affinity: - Description: This is the first of the Kaguya dances that are taught to younglings. The idea of this dance is to create a sword from the shoulder bone, as hard as steel. This is due to the ability to harden bones that is unique to the Kaguya. This sword looks like a bone, with a sharpened end on one side, the blade side. On the handle, it has the ending that has become familiar as the look of bones. It is roughly extended to 2 1/2ft. long, not counting the handle, which would probally even it out to around 3ft. This bone is widly considered the most barbaric and weakest of the dances. The dance is one filled iwth fluid motions and acrobatics, making it beautiful to watch. =================================================== Name:Lightning Release – Lightning Blast [Raiton – Raikou Bakuha no Jutsu] Rank:D Type:Ninjutsu Element:Ration Discription:The users fingertips begin to glow a light blue as they fire off lightning bolts from the fingertips,A technique utilizing lightning fired from the fingers.  
Name:Lightning Release - Flash Bolt Skill [Raiton - Sekoi Boruto No Jutsu] Rank:D Type:Ninjutsu Element:Ration Discription:By gathering energy from the electrical ions in the air, and mixing it with chakra, the user of this technique can create an orb within there hands that, when released, creates a explosion radius of 3ft all around them.  
Name:Lightning Release – Static Collection Skill [Raiton - Seiteki Korekuto no Jutsu] Rank:D Type:Ninjutsu Element:Ration Discription:Gathering static electricity in the air it is channelled through the arms and stored within the users limb. Upon physical contact with another individual the static is discharged adding a shocking sensation to a taijutsu based attack.  
Name:Lightning Release - Thunder Clash Skill [Raiton – Denkou Gachin no Jutsu] Rank:C Type:Ninjutsu Element:Ration Discription:A skill that is normally used after a Lightning jutsu, to add a thunder based effect. When the lightning jutsu strikes, it will utter forth a shockwave which will strike the opponent.  
Name:Lightning Release - Binding Chains of Lightning [Raiton - Bindingu Rensa Raikou No Jutus] Rank:C Type:Ninjutsu Element:Ration Discription:The user gathers chakra within their arm as it begins to spark with electricity. This materializes a chain which can be used to attack the opponent. Every blow sending a severe shock through the body, and can also be used to wrap around the opponent for continuous shocking.  
Name:Lightning Release - Jolt Clamp [Raiton - Yusuburu Kasugai No Jutsu] Rank:C Type:Ninjutsu Element:Ration Discription:The user turns their chakra into electrical current and grabs the opponent, sending a jolt of electricity into the opponent temporarily paralyzing an area of muscle.  
Name:Lightning Release - Thunder Ball [Raiton - Raikyuu] Rank:C Type:Ninjutsu Element:Ration Discription:Holding out their hands the user creates a ball with a one ft radius. The user can then either hold onto the ball and slam it into the opponent delivering a severe shock or throw it from a range and deliver weaker shocking damage.
Name:Lightning Release – Lightning Scatter Shot Skill [Raiton - Raikou Gorogoro Tama no Jutsu] Rank:C Type:Ninjutsu Element:Ration Discription:A technique which is an upgraded version of the Lightning Blast Skill. Utilizing the same principles the user gathers chakra into their fingertips, but changing the nature of the chakra into electricity and then firing it off as what seems to be bullets. When striking against the ground, they let off a burst of electricity within a two foot radius.
Name:Lightning Release – Lightning Strike Skill [Raiton - Raikou Dageki no Jutsu] Rank:C Type:Ninjutsu Element:Ration Discription:Giving off chakra into the air, the user created the energy necessary to generate a bolt of lightning. This lightning can be then guided in the general direction of the opponent. The jutsu is based used when channelled through metal strings as the user doesn’t have to worry about aiming and does augmented damage. | |
| | | Inuzuka Chojiro
Posts : 133 Points : 140 Join date : 2010-03-20
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| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Fri May 28, 2010 7:59 am | |
| Only mods and Admin may post in profiles.
First You need to have a minimum of 3 weaknesses that must balance your strengths.
Second, Equipment needs to be detailed. What do you have and how much/many of it are there. What is standard to one is not standard to another and quantity is needed so I do not want to see someone launching Hundreds of shurikan. and tell where each equipment is located. As to the summoned weapons those need to be jutsus, which I do not see one weapon summon amongst any of your jutsus and you would need one summon per EACH weapon you can summon.
Another issue is your description, What about things like hair color and eye color?
lastly Kaguya was the last of his clan....How were you not killed then? and a bloodline application needs to be filled out
If another mod or admin would wish to somment, please go ahead. | |
| | | Uchiha Serou
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| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Fri May 28, 2010 8:16 am | |
| For the record, I'm a new Mod here. | |
| | | Kei Ikuhara
Posts : 17 Points : 22 Join date : 2010-04-05
| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Fri May 28, 2010 8:23 am | |
| Right...>-> I really should log on my other account, but don't feel like again. Asako Kabuki speaking here. I'm a mod too.So, some problems in your profile: - Quote :
- Darkness: Dark
---> It's not used as an element on this site. If yes, ask special permission for it. Second, no where you have the "bone element" which should be there, since it's your bloodline trait apparently. In your history, there is no chuunin arc? Add one. v-v Be precise about your weapons ._. How much you have and such. And where you have them, like in a hippouch and such. Oh yeah, if you have scrolls or any of that, you need to mention that too. You got no weaknesses? That is one direct way to rejection of your profile, mate. Bloodline approval? ._.; I mean, I need one and want a link to the bloodline approval. - Quote :
- Name: Release
Rank: E Element: None Description: This jutsu allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell. ----> It's at least a C rank. Like waterfall running, water walking and tree climbing - Quote :
- Name:Lightning Release - Thunder Ball [Raiton - Raikyuu]
Rank:C Type:Ninjutsu Element:Ration Discription:Holding out their hands the user creates a ball with a one ft radius. The user can then either hold onto the ball and slam it into the opponent delivering a severe shock or throw it from a range and deliver weaker shocking damage. -------> Is this a copy of chidori? Or Wind shuriken rasengan? Anyways, even if it isn't, it's way too powerful for a C rank. ...and I'll stop commenting here. I think I said enough to denie your profile. If you got questions, don't hesistate to ask them to a mod or administrator. We're here to help too. o-o Anyways, till you reviewed your profile, it's denied by me. o-o | |
| | | Inuzuka Rika
Posts : 61 Points : 81 Join date : 2010-03-18
| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Fri May 28, 2010 4:09 pm | |
| Note to all admins and mods: Dark Element is use in the site but belongs to the Satsukari and Marus clan~ | |
| | | Inuzuka Rika
Posts : 61 Points : 81 Join date : 2010-03-18
| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Fri May 28, 2010 4:10 pm | |
| Name: Release Rank: E Element: None Description: This jutsu allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell. ===== This jutsu is call Kai and It's a Ninjutsu Technique Please change the name to the proper one and put [release genjutsu] beside it | |
| | | Sairento E. Kouseitan'i
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| Subject: Re: Sairento E. Kouseitan'i {Done} Tue Jun 01, 2010 7:50 am | |
| Alright Here we go
Due to Rikas comment, The KOUSEITAN'I clan, which is a clan the old gang know of, you would know that Darkness is one of there element.
There is no bone element, the bones is Kekkai Genkai not a element.
as me being a chuunin Im currently Living as a chuunin as I rp. | |
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