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PostSubject: Youji Zi Schiwatas [DONE]   Youji Zi Schiwatas [DONE] Icon_minitimeWed May 26, 2010 8:22 am

Name: Youji Zi Schiwatas
Alias: None
Explanation behind Alias: N/A

Gender: Male
Age: 23
Height: 5'7 feet
Body Type: Slim Built
Weight: 121 lbs

Appearance:
Youji is a slender, yet fairly muscular, male of average height with a melancholic appearance, fairly short, messy black hair, pale white skin, a black upper lip, and green eyes with slit-shaped pupils similar to a cat's. Part of his bangs falls between his eyes, and he has distinctively thick eyebrows. He has teal lines that descend from his eyes, making it appear as if he is crying. His facial expression rarely changes, and he is almost always frowning. He wears typical clothes: a white jacket, black sash, and a white hakama. His jacket seems to have long coattails and the collar is rather high. He has a seal located on his chest where a heart would normally be.

Personality:
Youji's personality is rather strange as some people say. Sometimes he acts just like a teenager and it's hardly to believe he can be serious, but when he is at meetings or in a mission he acts cool and calm without anything distracting him. He likes to be laid-back and sleep most of the day, if it's sunny he ussually goes outside on a field looking at the sky and day-dreaming.
When the weather is cloudy or it's raining outside he ussually can be found in the training room or in the library. Something that people don't know about him is that he has a weakness from sweets and especially ice cream, even if it's hot or cold outside he would always eat an ice cream.
His cold demeanor allows him to stay completely calm and in control in most situations, and he is not easy surprised or caught off-guard. However, he does not seem to comprehend the human trait of fighting against all odds or the very concept of the Human heart/emotions.
Even if he looks normal Youji has locked inside him a state of insanity that rarely comes out but when it does the only thing that he cares for is to be covered in the blood of others. For that when he goes in missions he ussually goes alone cause he could never know when that part of him could get out and kill everybody near him.
Youji is also highly perceptive, cunning, and analytical. Youji is fully capable of committing truly abhorrent and inhumane actions without feeling any shred of remorse or hesitation.


Likes: ice cream, wasting time, reading, fighting, snow, cats
Dislikes: hot days, too much work, dogs, loud noises
Habits: torturing enemies, sleeping alot, cuddling cute things

Background

History:
Youji was born in a small village near Yuki no kuni village, ever since he was little he wanted to become a ninja even if his parents told him it is dangerous. At the age of 7 he succesfully enrolled in the ninja academy. He was a top student known for his intelligence and way of creating strategies. After 2 years of ninja academy he became a genin. As he was traning alone in the forest he met an outlaw, for him all the ninjas were good people so he wasn't expecting him to be bad. And he played his card in order to become friend with Youji. He acted nice towards him and even trained him a little. Youji learned alot from him but he didn't told anyone about him. The outlaw continued to be nice with Youji.

After one year of playing nice with Youji he made his move. Knowing were all the guards are he striked fast and without being noticed. But he was not alone, he was part of a gang made out of six ninja. The whole town was massacred and in the fight the ninja placed some seal on Youji's eyes so he could never see.. He was left alone at the age of 10. For two days he stood there crying next to his parents bodies, that day marked him for life. He lost all his emotions and his heart was covered in a hard shell that nobody can pass. He lived alone without sentiments and forgetting all his happy memories cause like he said those will bring only pain to him. He soon advanced to the chunnin level and became more skilled than ever.

After only 3 months of becoming chunnin he was advanced, because of his skills, to jounin rank. Even with this he continued to train harder so that he can become stronger. At the age of 20 he accepted a mission that led him to the ones that killed his familly and village. He didn't wanted revenge on them because he stoped carring about that he just wanted to kill that man for betraying him. As he found their hideout that man he was searching for was not there. He killed almost everyone there and let alive only one so that he can take information from him. He found out that the man he was searching for left their group along time ago after he settled at his own house.

He continued his search for that man with the information he had, he still didn't returned to the village after he killed all the gang. Youji soon found out were the man was leaving and lucky for him he made his own house in the forest. When he got there he heard two kids outside the house. He really didn't cared so he started walking towards the house and then runned next to a kid kicking him and sending him in the house wall with a strong slam. As the other kid was screaming in fear he simply cut his neck with his sword witout thinking. He entered the house and there he heard his wife worrying and crying because of what happened. Youji just decapited her with a single sword slash. As he tooked the three bodies in the house he waited at the door for that man. As soon as the man entered the house and saw what Youji did to his familly, Youji launched himself from the chair and stabbed him in the middle of the chest with his bare hand. After he killed him he left that house and returned to the village like nothing happened. But they found out so because of that Youji was categorized as a S-Rank criminal and sended to the prison. Four years passed since then but Youji still is left without emotions.

Shinobi Registration

Style: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Element(s): Lightning, Water

Primary Elements Lightning, Water

Combination Element None

Village: Yuki no kuni
Rank: Special Jounin
Clan: None
Bloodline Trait: None
Strengths: (3-5 Combat related strengths)
Weaknesses: (3-5 Combat related weaknesses)

Equipment:

1X Sword
30X Needle
10X SHuriken
20 meters of steel wire


Fighting Techniques:
Jutsu:

Name: Clone Technique
Rank: E
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Supplementary
Description: This technique creates several intangible copies of the user, which vanish upon touch. A basic technique for all shinobi.

Name: Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Supplementary
Description: This technique allows the user to take the likeness of another object. A basic technique for all shinobi.

Name: Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Supplementary
Description: This technique lets the user replace him/herself with another object, usually a small log. A basic technique for all shinobi.

Name: Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Supplementary
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and their intended destination.

Name: See Me Or Not
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: He runs towards (or other ways) his opponent in a very quick speed that will make the opponent cant see him. He then will try to stab the oppenent with scissor in the eyes

Name: 100% Punch
Rank: D
Style: Taijutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: The user gathers large amounts of chakra to his/her hand and a releases punch at the opponent, causing severe damage.

Name: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: Youji gathers chakra in his hand and creates a ball of lightning that he can lunch at the enemy.

Name: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: The user places his hands to the ground after converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the target. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: B
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from his hands. The user can vary it's power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water technique.

Name: Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Supplementary
Description: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body. Additionally, water clones only have one-tenth of the original person's power. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water.

Name: Lightning Bombs
Rank: B
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: Small balls of lightning cover the area(floating in the air). They work like landmines. If touched, they explode and may disrupt the opponents nervous system. If the user touches this bombs they will explode but they won’t affect him.


Skills


One Handed Weapon Wielding
The ability to wield any sort of weapon with the use of one hand only. Able to move it as you would be able to with only one hand, and able to move it efficiently without wasting any effort in doing so. Leaving your other hand free to be used in any way choosen.

Master Swordsmanship Specialist: Though he rarely engages in it, Youji appears to be highly skilled in swordsmanship. He is capable of using his speed for flawless precision and to inflict lethal attacks without much effort. Youji prefers to wield his sword with his right hand, leaving the other hand free, though it usually remains in his pocket. He is quite adept at blocking.

Master Hand-to-Hand Combatant: Youji relies mostly on hand-to-hand combat, rarely drawing his sword at all. His trademark attack towards prey that he likes is to impale an opponent in the chest and gouge a hole in them.\
Keen Intellect: In addition to his remarkable combat prowess, Youji is also gifted with great insight and understanding of situations at hand. With his calm and collected nature, Youji can be highly perceptive and analytical, allowing him to easily deduce the basic idea of his opponent's skills to figure out their strengths and weaknesses.

Enhanced Strength: Youji is deceptively mighty for his build. He can upturn huge portions of rock floor with a single strike at the ground with his sword. He has also shown the ability to kick an opponent a tremendous distance with one strong kick

Enhanced Inquiry: Youji’s ability to sense chakra. From a single glance at his opponent, Youji can immediately determine how powerful his opponent is. He is also able to comprehend the flow and concentration of the person's chakra.

Relationships: None
Family: None


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PostSubject: Re: Youji Zi Schiwatas [DONE]   Youji Zi Schiwatas [DONE] Icon_minitimeFri May 28, 2010 8:12 am

First your description is to short for an SJ, I mean One paragraph should be dedicated to childhood, one for genin, one for chuunin, one for jounin, and one for sj.

Name: See Me Or Not
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: He runs towards (or other ways) his opponent in a very quick speed that will make the opponent cant see him. He then will try to stab the oppenent with scissor in the eyes

The problem with this is, scissors...Um ok but you do not have scissors in your equipment.

Name: Lightning Destruction
Rank: B (not sure)
Style: Ninjutsu
Type: Offensive
Description: The user places his hands to the ground after converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the target. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

That should probably be A-rank which is fine since You do not have any A-ranks yet.

Please fix as soon as possible.
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