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Daiki Kataruno
Posts : 16 Points : 39 Join date : 2010-02-21
| Subject: Daiki Kataruno Sat Feb 27, 2010 10:30 am | |
| Name:Daiki Kataruno Alias: Shadow Thunder Explanation behind Alias:Daiki is the top fighter and strongest missin nin in the slums of the Chaos country and even tho the Thunder kage and him fight and disagree ALOT. They actually need each other in away to both survive and the accept each other almost as equals. Diaki is very often in the dark and not seen until he want you to see him, and also very little is known about him which explains for shadow. The thunder part is actually becasue he always comes right after lightning"Static Sage" and yet they are always together and also he wanted to put himself with the thunder village since he will take it over soon!
Gender:Male Age: 15 Height: 5' 7'' Body Type: Fit, Muscular Weight: 135 pounds
Appearance: Has brown hair in a usual bed head hair style.Usally wearing some type of a vest with cargo pants.His hands are usally wrapped up almost half way to his elbow.He has some tribal tatoos on his shoulder and wrist under the bandages.His arms look pretty buff he has a little 5'0 Clock shadow as a beard and sometimes he rocks an open school boy shirt and has modern shoes with the classic wooden pieces on the bottom with a metal slate on the bottom and and comes up on the sides alittle.
Personality: He is a real roughty type alittle hyperactive and trying to fight with everyone.But once he gets into a fight he is so very serious and he comes himself down and can fight with a leveled head.He is the type to make everything into training a simple walk in the park will turn into a marathon.
Likes:The struggle, strategic fights, money, living life to have fun Dislikes:Weak people, People that think they can fight,The static sage, people with loyalty Habits: Starting things!
Background
History: I was born to the Kataruno family and lived there forceibly and was taught the ways of fighting much the same way.Until I was 12 I left and ran off and lived in a cave for years and began resisiding in the forest as a robber and lived off what I stole! I then robbed the wrong person and it turned out to be a secound in command leader of a huge gang and they all came after me and and captured me.I was brought to the big city and beaten near death and then I made a deal with the boss to be his bodyguard and do anything he says for my life!While in his care his other guards taught me to street fight aswell as wrestle and simple taijutsu.They taught me a valuable lesson, no matter how mad you are to level your head and relax yourself before fighting. I fought and killed countless people to protect him until he wanted me to kill an old lady for walking in front of him while he was walking down the road.I love the struggle to teach me all it did but I respect others that have gone throught a hard life aswell so, I pretended to strike her but instead I quickly turned around and seized his throath out his neck, and killed his body guards. I then took all the money they had on them and left that life and tried to live a simple bad ass life.Among my travels I found a little missionary in the forest with very talented monks in the art of taijutsu and ninjutsu.They taught me some taijutsu stances,techniques and pressure/weak spots on the human body.He learned to use wind chakra in his hands slightly to do more deadly strikes and speed! They taught me how to use it in the simplist form as doing simple wind techniques and to infuse wind chakra into parts of my body.But very rarely used with his usual fighting style. I then left and went to the biggest shit hole in the world,Chaos Country. Nobody can be found there so none would ask about me and I would be protected. I got into many fight in a single day let alone my entire residence there. I relised that the people had reason to be mad since the Thunder kage, Neo, screwed them over. He used them and then left them in the slums, but I fought these men and they were quiet talented fighters. I realised that if that if just one person could take control of the slums and put that skill to good use then they could have any ambition done for them. We surround the village and have a "lookouts" which are my people who never really do go to sleep. I'm not the offical leader I'm just the most well known strongest fighter there so I run the whole shit! I tell everyone do what you want just two rules! Rule 1: Give the Thunder kage hell ! & Rule 2:If your gonna be here then be here. We ahev held down pretty good and we plan to hold down alot more "pretty good"!
Shinobi Registration
Style:Taijutsu
Element(s):
Primary Elements:Wind
Village:None Rank: Missin-Nin Clan: NONE Bloodline Trait: NONE Strengths: Fast, stealthy, good reflexes, good hand to hand fighter Weaknesses: Very Cocky, Uses more brute force then anything.
Equipment:
* 5xKunai (Kept in pouch on the waist) * Metal bracers-much like gauntlets but not sharp and made to just deal with swords easier for a taijutsu user! (kept in pouch) * 2Xsmoke grenades * 10 feet of wire Fighting Techniques: Later post
Relationships:NONE Family: NONE
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| | | Ojike Zetsubou
Posts : 145 Points : 173 Join date : 2010-02-14
| Subject: Re: Daiki Kataruno Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:41 am | |
| For your appearance, you're pretty vague on most of it. It'd be better if you gave at least one or two more details about your outfit. Such as a distinguishable tatoo or something of that nature. Also, where do you keep your equipment? Obviously you'll need some sort of pouch to keep the Kunai so that you don't stab yourself when putting them into your pocket. - Spoiler:
Appearance: Has brown hair in a usall bed head hair style.Usally wearing some type of a vest with cargo pants.His hands are usally wrapped up almost half way to his elbow.He has some tribal tatoos on his shoulder and that it about it.
As for his personality, you stated that he is short tempered and quick to conflict. How is it that he has been trained to be level headed in battle or to calm himself down? You probably should have something attributed to that in your biography as well. I'll mention it if I don't read it as I continue going down the application. - Spoiler:
Personality: He is a real roughty type alittle hyperactive and trying to fight with everyone.But once he gets into a fight he is so very serious and he comes himself down and can fight with a leveled head.He is the type to make everything into training a simple walk in the park will turn into a marathon.
Your history is rather short. It would be best if you could find a few more details about how you came across your ability to use wind techniques. Perhaps it'd be during training or something similar. Also, as I stated above, you could put that the gangster's bodyguards taught you many things, one of which could be that calming down before battle and to fight with a level head. - Spoiler:
History: I was born to the Kataruno family and lived there forceibly and was taught the ways of fighting much the same way.Until I was 12 I left and ran off and lived in a cave for years and began resisiding in the forest as a robber and lived off what I stole! I then robbed the wrong person and it turned out to be a secound in command leader of a huge gang and they all came after me and and captured me.I was brought to the big city and beaten near death and then I made a deal with the boss to be his bodyguard and do anything he says for my life!While in his care his other guards taught me to street fight aswell as wrestle and simple taijutsu. I fought and killed countless people to protect him until he wanted me to kill an old lady for walking in front of him while he was walking down the road.I pretended to strike her but insstead I grabbed his throath and ripped it out his neck, and killed his body guards I then took the money from them and left that life and tried to live a simple bad ass life.He learned to use wind chakra in his hands slightly to do more deadly strikes and speed!But very rarely used!
A little pro-tip for you. If you don't have a combination element then you can probably just leave it out -until- you have achieved one. - Spoiler:
Shinobi Registration
Style: Taijutsu Element(s): Wind
Primary Elements:Wind
Combination Element
As for your equipment, there are a few minor problems. I would like that you number the amount of kunai you have with you. A normal Genin could wield about 15-25 normally within a medium sized pouch. Also tell (in parenthesis) where the items are located on your body; whether they're underneath your outfit, resting on a hip or otherwise. It's best that you be as descriptive as possible. Also, feel free to add a secondary blade type onto your character, such as a tanto (A short blade used for stabbing motions, but with the ability to slash as well). Genin are allowed to use such weapons, and it would probably be great strapped aside of your pouch. - Spoiler:
Equipment:
* kunai * Metal bracers-much like gauntlets but not sharp and made to just deal with swords easier for a taijutsu user!
The rest of your application is fine. xD Don't worry about it much. It may seem like a lot to change, but it's really not that hard. :3 Best of luck to you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And just in case you don't know, I created this application template.. >.> So don't go and tell me not to post here. | |
| | | Daiki Kataruno
Posts : 16 Points : 39 Join date : 2010-02-21
| Subject: Re: Daiki Kataruno Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:18 pm | |
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| | | Neo Yurizaki Admin
Posts : 176 Points : 266 Join date : 2010-02-15
Ninja File Rank:: Static Sage
| Subject: Re: Daiki Kataruno Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:22 pm | |
| Approved I just suggest you add some fighting styles! | |
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