My poem's

"Rhyme"

I sit here all the time
thinking and writing
Should i try to rhyme?

I sit with my eye
closed to the world
wondering what woul you do if i die

Wandering quietly in the cold
freezing waiting for your tender touch
Over and over I've been told

You words cut deep
but you don't care
I just wait untill you sleep

Writen by ~ Andrew Mavredakis

"Love"

Love turns to Sorrow
In unexpected ways

Happyness to depression
with the simplest words

The strugle is daily
while some overcome

The anger inside me wins the battle
but depression wins the war

How i miss the days
when happiness always won

Now I just fear
What i have become


Written by ~ Andrew Mavredakis

>_> am i aloud to comment these? because I really wana o.o.
omg. i <3 <3 <333 poetry. any expression in words is like awesome to me. and i really really like the second one. it is beast.

-high fives-

lol of cource you can I posted them so i could see what people thought of them. Ima post some of my drwaing's soon

Sweeet muffins :3 cant waittt