Yay go me and being able to do this for the first time on this site. *takes a deep breath to say what he has to say*
Ok boy and girl, I would like to point out that this spar is FILLED with what is called auto-hitting. Example:
As he took in the breath Raina's eyes widened more. She took his moment of pause to charge chakra into her leg and sweep it against the back of his knees. Then she flipped onto her feet and jumped back against the wall of the cell. "Hehehe!!"
Raina here declared that her sweep hit her opponent, thus not giving him the chance to dodge. The proper way to do this might have been something like this:
As he took in the breath Raina's eyes widened more. She took his moment of pause to charge chakra into her leg and tried to sweep Neo's legs at the knee. Then she flipped onto her feet and jumped back against the wall of the cell. "Hehehe!!"
Is she the only one guilty...No Neo has also auto hitted. Ex:
Neo takes the hit and let her make contact as he just stands there. Now that she hit him he knews exactly where she was. He grabbed her arm and yanked her down to the ground hard, slamming her into the ground.
"Riana you must learn to take out your opponent with no hesitation no matter who it is!"
Neo takes out a kunai and bend s down to Riana. He begins to bring it to her throath
Here you say you grabbed her hand and thus gave her no chance to escape. You could of said you made a grab for her hand in order to throw her towards the ground.
You have to have faith in your opponents to take hits accordingly especially if the move was unexpected, and if they dont take the hits, that is what RP mods are for. =P