Zenkai Hatsugen -Sniff- {THANKS TO MY DEAR PORTUGUESE FRIEND FOR THE GREAT HELP. THANK YOU}

Name: Zenkai Hatsugen
Alias: Sniff
Explanation behind Alias:


Gender: Male
Age: 17
Height: 1.79 meters (5'9 feet).
Body Type: Agile,endurable,a bit muscular.
Weight: 67kilograms (148 lbs).

Appearance:

Zenkai stands as a tall figure at 1.79 meters, his hair is jet black and long to the elbows, his eyes are blue and they have a very narrow and eagle-like look.The chuunin is dressed in the usual chuunin outfit when on duty but his casual clothes are traditional Japanese. He has a seal on his stomach which seals his great chakra reserve that is as twice as his normal chakra pool which is huge (Heritage...). Zenkai also wears a bandage on his left fist and when training he has a bandage on his right feet either. He also has a tatoo on his hand (on that part of the hand when usually your name is written if you make a name tatoo, you know where you see your veins usually xD) where his nickname is written in kanji. He has a slight scar over his right eyebrow.

Personality:
Zenkai is has a strange persona, he can be the good as an angel and he could be evil as a demon and so the cons and prons go with it too. The chuunin is usually silent and considers thinking as the most important role in the human but he is very emotional when it comes to rights, Zenkai would errupt out of nowhere if the time is right when someones rights are being rejected and abused. He is a very tactical man and would never talk without thinking or run out of speech.

The chuunin is not a spontaneous person, he reads carefully and between the lines and his ears could hear a footstep from another planet while his eyes are always on guard along with his reflexes. He is a very careful man as you may deduce. Zenkai has never fallen in love and would avoid to as he knows that would distract him from duty.

Likes: Organization (The opposite of chaos if you are wondering), Shogi, Mastering his skills and abilities, learning.
Dislikes: Chaos, Spontaneousity (lol), Slacking at work.
Habits: Training and Studying.

Background

History:
Long ago in the Thunder Village was born a prodigial boy that would soon grow up to his expectations. He was born in a time of war so his parents didn't live enough to see him grow up in a great ninja with a huge potential. He was six when he started to live alone and just when the war had finished the government of the country had invested into rebuilding the village along with the Kage giving the orphan a own place to stay when he hit 12 and became a genin while for those six years he lived in an orphanage and grew tough and self-centered. But inside lived a caring person who would die for equal rights and for the future of mankind but on the outside he was cold and didn't show much of his warm side because of his rough childhood.

On the day he became genin Zenkai was very happy but again he didn't show it and just left to his new home and got ready for the next day which was when he would get assigned to his team.
On the next day Zenkai was a minute late for the draft but it wasn't too bad, no one noticed him except some elders. With the opening ceremony done Zenkai would be assigned to a jounin that would resemble Zenkai - strict, organized and caring. Both his teammates though were something else - always laughing and talking and always having fun without thinking for their future unlike Zenkai who would always look far into the future and plan out things, his teammates were living day to day.
The time when Zenkai became a genin was a time of "Cold War" and thus in one D-rank mission which turned out to be hell for the team, the teammates were slaughtered while the sensei escaped along with an injured Zenkai.
The boy had never seen such horror of that massacre that happened, his unorganized teammates became his friends...when they died even though they failed their mission of changing Zenkai to an open persona which made Zenkai close himself more.
The sensei would a few days later commit suicide for incompability which made Zenkai's trauma bleed more.
For one complete year Zenkai avoided any contact and trained at night when no one was training!
And when that year passed and when the prodial boy was 14 and a half he decided to join the list of the chuunin exam and so the end of his 1 year exile was over.

When the chuunin exams came in town Zenkai felt more than ready. He was anxious. He had trained one year alone so much as one can do for 3 years.
The boy was there to win and he would win that exam, it was in his blood.
Zenkai is also a hungry for victory boy and he would stop from nothing for victory and with that radical ambition and skills the boy graduated even though he had to kill one ninja girl in the finals but by then Zenkai had overwhelmed his fears of death and finally understood that he was a ninja and that meant that other ninjas like him CAN be killed even though his philosophy is that murder is the last resort.
After he graduated he had shown his first smile at the Kage with his chuunin outfit on him and was prepared for duty now more open and more caring then before...because he was a chuunin...a squad captain!

Shinobi Registration

Style: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu.
Element(s): Earth

Primary Elements - Earth

Combination Element

Village: Thunder Village
Rank: Chuunin
Clan: None.
Bloodline Trait: More of a heritage trait passed down - Enormous chakra pools.
Strengths: Very very fast, Strength, Chakra Control, Enormous chakra pools, very resistant to genjutsu effects (not immune).
Weaknesses: Most of his jutsus quickly drain chakra, , does not use fatal power against opponents unless made to, Chivalry.

Equipment:

* 25 Kunai - On the back part of the waist in a pouch
* 20 Shuriken - On the right and left hip in a pouch.
* 15 Explosive tags - On the back part of the waist in a pouch.
* 10 Smoke bombs - On the front part of the waist in a pouch.
* 15 Empty Scrolls - Pockets in the middle of his chuunin jacket.
* 3 Steel wires - In the big left pocket on his jacket.
* 1 Survival equipment (like food and so on) - Pockets in the chuunin jacket but big survival items are carried in a bag in missions.
* 1 Basical Medical Treatment equipment - In the big right pocket on his jacket.
* 3 Weapon scrolls - In another big pocket in the middle of his chuunin jacket - each scroll contains 15 kunais, 10 shuriken, 5 explosive tags, 3 smoke bombs, one more steel wire.

Fighting Techniques:

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Relationships:
Family:

Okie dokie. I'm going to have to ask that you change your history from the updown to a spoiler. Though it does add a bit of flare to your application, it also makes it more challenging for moderators, such as myself, to find where it begins and ends.

e.e So go ahead and fix that, and then I'll take a look at your application.

Alrighty, now that you've completed that little part, I'll be glad to show you a few mistakes. x3

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This must be some mistake! Dx You're not a girlie? D: Blasphemy! xD Jk'ing~! Seriously though, if you're going to use the metric system, you must then (in parenthesis) include their english equivilant in feet and pounds. This is non-negotiable.

Spoiler:

Alrighty, I'ma have to ask you to itemize these into numbers of items. Such as 20 kunai, 15 shuriken and so on. Explosive tags are always in smaller amounts because they're more costly to produce. Smoke bombs take up space, so they'll be about the same as the explosive tags.

Also, include in this list a medium sized pouch and point out where on your body it's located. Whether it's around your leg, hip, or waist is entirely up to you. Remember, you may also have a weapons scroll that can summon additional kunai and shuriken.

One last thing, you left in the parenthesis that told you what to put in there. xD Chop that out and remove the list of items that are directly next to the "Equipment:" line. They're supposed to be in an itemized form and therefore should not be placed up there as well as below.

Spoiler:

Your fighting techniques are to be kept in decending order as well. This means S-ranks are posted at the top and E-ranks at the bottom. This is to help locate your technique. Seeing how some of your techniques vary in rank, it would be advised to have the current rank outside of parenthesis, and the variations inside parenthesis.
One last thing here, I'd like that you follow the correct Jutsu format, which is posted below:

Name:
Rank:
Range:
Style:
Description:

Range is to be in this format

Range: Short-medium distance; 0-25 meters (0-82 feet)

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Edited =D I hope you like it.

Approved

Yup. o-o Approved.