M'kay, I'll have you go ahead and just do a few things for me.
First of all, I'd like you to move those elements Wind and Earth under your primary element list. If you so choose to make an additional element by combining them later, please do so.
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"Shinobi Registration
Style: Taijutsu
Element(s): Wind,Earth
Primary Elements
Combination Element"
Your Equipment area should be separated slightly with a line between the heading and the actual list. Also, as a special jounin ranked Shinobi, you should have much more specialized equipment than just that.
I'd like that you add a weapon of some sort, that would aid your taijutsu abilities. Perhaps a gauntlet with blades on it, or something of that nature. Do not forget to tell where these objects are located on your person. The simplest way to do this is to add a medium sized pouch, and have the smaller items, such as Kunai, Shuriken, and Exploding tags inside it.
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"Village: Heaven village
Rank: Special Jounin
Clan: none
Bloodline Trait: none
Strengths: Taijutsu,strength,speed,agility,and tact
Weaknesses: Genjutsu,Some ninjutsu, Fire element, His friends, and His past memories
Equipment:
*20xkunai
*20xshuriken
*Large Summoning scroll
*15xbomb tags
*Leg weights (100lbs)
*Chakra Seals (placed on arms)"
I'm going to ask that you follow the appropriate Jutsu template when adding them to your list. Also, make sure to have your techniques in order of ranks. Decending or Ascending orders do not matter, but they must be arranged according to rank. Element and fighting style oranization is optional at this point.
One last thing. Your descriptions of the techniques are lacking quite a bit. I'll have you change that, though.
Fine chakra control as in this technique would be neccessary if one were to use it. This technique should be more of a C-rank rather than an E-rank. Also, this technique's description needs a little more. How would this chakra react once it enters the target's body? What would the effects of the chakra be? How widespread are the effects? Do not forget to put the range with this technique. No matter what kind of taijutsu technique it is, there is almost always a range. Put it in.
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"Fighting Techniques:
Name:Shikimori style Chakra burst
Type:Tai
Rank:E
Description: The user focuses chakra into their fist then executes a punch. At the moment of impact the user releases the chakra into the opponent increasing the damage of the punch."
In this technique, I'd like for you to mention how long the image of the user will remain after they have moved. For a split second, or for an extended period of time? Also, moving at a high rate of speed is obviously going to cause some sort of flare up in the surroundings, what would be in place that such a thing wouldn't happen, or does it? Range would probably not be effected by this in the short run, but how far can the user go before the effects of the technique wear off?
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"Name:Afterimage
Type:Tai
Rank:D
Description:The user moves at increcibly high speeds in order to leave an illusion of their self behind."
This technique will need a range added to it. Remember, the ranking of a technique is also loosely based on range. Be sure to take that into account and plan accordingly.
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"Name: Elemental Sphere
Rank: C
Description: A jutsu used by the Shikimori where the user focuses pure chakra into a ball shape before hurling it at there opponent. The pure chakra has the properties to absorb attacks and redirect it towards the opponent"
Alright, as for this technique, I'd like very much for you to explain what the dragon does that would aid in battle. So far all you have here is that it appears. What is it used for? What are its special abilities and drawbacks? What's it's range?
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"Name:Elemental Dragon Fist
Rank: C
Description: The user focuses their chakra into their fist storing it so that it is unstable. Then the user executes a punch releaseing the chakra in the form of a giant dragon of pure chakra"
What's this technique's range? It's a B-rank technique, so there are bound to be a few dawbacks to this as well. What are those drawbacks? Large chakra use? A chance of recoil?
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"Name:Napalm Dragon Fist
Rank: B
Description: With the training of emanyeru, Kazuki was able to fuse together the exploding palms and the dragon fist to obtain an incredibly destructive attack. The user store unstable chakra into his fist then releases it in a punch. At the point of release the user then quickly detonates the chakra as it comes into dangerous range of the opponent."
Okay, this technique needs a range limit as well. Shooting multiple targets tends to lower the accuracy of an attack, keep that in mind while adding to it's description. Are there any other drawbacks that may be attributed to this technique?
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"Name: Element sphere barage
Rank: B
Type:Nin-tai jutsu
Description: The user releases chakra so that they form small spheres. Then the user moves at fast speeds kicking the opponent into the air in which the spheres then follow the enemy and explode on impact."
If you're going to have this technique, you must describe them in your equipment section. Also, seeing how range wouldn't be applicable in this technique, just register it as a "N/A."
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"Name:Shikimori Weapon Summoning
Rank:B
Type:Nin
Description:The user pulls out a scroll in which he/she then executes handsigns in order to summon one of the many Legendary Shikimori Weapons."
You mentioned that your character is weak with fire style techniques. An A-ranked jutsu of this magnitude would obviously be out of your abilities to use. I offer the following remedy, rather than a flaming dragon, make it a stone dragon.
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"Name:Meteor Dragon Assult
Rank:A
Type:Nin
Description:The user focuses chakra into their fist as they punch the ground. This causes several stones or rocks to bounce upward. The rocks then burn up into flaming dragon heads as they fly at the opponent at high speeds. With proper training the user can freely manipulate the dragon heads at will creating a defensive technique as well."
Once more, range is key here. How far will the effects of this attack be able to harm a target? Also, be sure to include any side effects of this technique. Chakra usage would probably be a more likely side effect of this technique; seeing as the chakra is being expelled out and away from the body.
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"Name: Neo dragon fist
rank:A
Description: The most powerful version of the elemental dragon fist. The user swirls the chakra around his fist focusing it to it's fullest extent."
This technique is in need of reorganization. xD Just slap it in the right order and add a range to it, and it'll be fine.
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"Name:Shikimori Taijutsu Art Air Burst
Rank:D
Type:taijutsu
Description:The user punches the air with such speed and intensity that it creates a vortex like affect that causes a solid mass of air to hit a far off target."
Alright, just one last technique to alter. :3 This one just needs a little more description added to it. It's an S-rank technique, there is -always- a drawback to its use. Also, you'll probably have to add an element to this techniqe if it rises from the ground. Probably an earthen style ninjutsu?
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"Name:Shikimori Ninjutsu Art Dragon Scale Wall
Rank:B
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: The user focuses their chakra all around the area around them. The user then smacks their hand on the ground triggering the creation of large walls shooting up from the ground made from rock hard dragon scales."
Just go ahead and follow the correct jutsu template and the rest of it should be fixed up easily.