Jashin clan done

Background Description:
This clan was started by a man who claimed to kill in the name of jashin [not hidan]. He claimed that jashin gave him a way to live for ever kill. Each kill gave him three day of imortality. The man how ever soon died because he was hung and couldn't move to kill. Jashin was not pleased with his human agent being killed. Jashin figured that it was the blood line limits of the clan that killed his agent. He destroyed their blood line and sent a new agent down to help spread his great name. Jashin figured this how ever why have one agent when you can have a whole clan of them. His agent made a clan which followed him. How ever you must go through a few trials to get in. First you must kill you're lover or some one you love. Then you must kill some one from you're own village. Then you must stab you're self in the heart trusting that jashin-sama well grant you the imortality.

Elements: N/A

Bloodline: N/A

Extras:
Name: Curse Technique: Death Controlling Possessed Blood
Type:Hiden, Ninjutsu
Rank:S
Element: none
Description: This technique is the clan's primary method of killing their opponents in the way of the Jashin religion.

First, The user makes every effort to draw blood from his opponent and consume it. After that, their skin turns black with white markings representing a skeleton, a symbol of absolute death. They then draw Jashin's symbol on the ground in blood and stands in the center. This serves as the link between the user and his victim.

Once the sacrificial ritual takes place, the victim is linked with the user until he either steps or is forced out of the circle. Any kind of injury that the user inflicts upon himself (or the injury they inflicted on him) is inflicted upon his target, be it a mere scratch to a pierce in the heart. If the user is forced to step out of the circle, the link is broken and the victim is set free, but all the user has to do is to step back into the circle to reactivate the link. Basically, this technique makes the user a living voodoo doll.

To keep the imortality you must kill every three days [real time or six topics and no not a real person a NPC.] And it must be 600 words the imortality last for three days.

If you make jashin-sama mad he well take away you're imortality for a month [real time.] The clan leader well act as jashins angent and messager and tell you what jashin wants you to do.

Done tell me if it is okay or not please ^^.

Looks fine to me, Approved unless said so by another staff member

However "Curse Technique: Death Controlling Possessed Blood" looks like it should be an S rank jutsu.

I didn't see the rank for it on naruto wiki so i thought no rank.