Koori Mizore [Done]

Name: Koori Mizore
Alias: --
Explanation behind Alias: --

Gender: Male
Age: 13
Height: 1.5 m
Body Type: Average size, skinny.
Weight: 140 pounds

Appearance:


Personality: Koori is a very too himself kind of person, he still likes to talk but hes more of a thinker, sometimes he enjoys company and then sometimes he wants to be left alone, the history of his clan made him this kind of person because of his cold heart. When it comes to training or missions his concentration cant be broken, he is also very strong willed as well. He also is unstable in his mind which would make him go on killing sprees to become normal.

Likes: The Cold, Rain, The Moon
Dislikes: The Heat, People Always Smiling, People saying they can change destiny.
Habits: Playing Chess with himslef, Killing Spree...due to his clans curse.

Background

History:

It was a bright day as koori was born, he cried a lot as life was giving to him, he was raised up on the mountains in snow country before he live in the village to settle in, He wanted his family to be proud of him so he oath to them that he would bring honour to his clan.

[Training Arc]
Training was a tough routine for koori because the clan was known for being strong, and weak members wernt liked, so he had to be the best. When he reach 8 years old his speed was very great and he trained with his father who gave him his basic training, this was a sign of bounding. The next step for him was to go to the ninja academy and become better.

[Academy Student Arc]
He applied for the academy and they denied for his age sake, but later on he applied again and they let him join, he wanted to show everyone that he wanst weak, he might not be strong in strength but he was surely the fastest, he had many jounins give him evil looks, this was because of the murderous intent that emits from him, it could be helped but for koori it was normal. He only completed his classes and sat alone as the cold aura made him feel at home. He past the exams which were easy for him and graduated at age 10.

[Training Arc]
Koori kept with his speed training which others were amazed and even the jounins, because they saw he kept training, 6 hours a day which tired him out a lot but he had a lot of stamina. Koori just wanted to be genin real soon and join a squad and meet with his own sensei. Speed and ninjutsu was the main training routine for him, he did practice in taijutsu as well.

[Genin Arc]
Koori was now a fully genin at the age of 10, of course he would be young in the squad but not that young. He didnt know really what to do, he mostly kept to himself but then later on started making friends along the way which gave him motivation to succeed. Then it hit him one day, news arivved from his clan that his mother died while giving birth and his father died in an avalanche, this hit koori hard. Now all of his motives change, he couldn’t trust people; he didn’t even know if he had a brother or sister, no clue, now kooriwonders alone in the darkness waiting for the light.

[Training Arc]
3 years and hes 13, koori has been training every day for 6 hours, 2 hours on speed, 2 hours on ninjutsu, and 2 hours on taijutsu , his aloneness push him to strive on, at this rate his speed was great like a begining chuunin now, hes smarter, He knows if he keeps training as he trys to control his killing spree.

Shinobi Registration

Style: Ninjutsu
Element(s):

Primary list
1. Wind
2. Liquid Nitrogen (Clan Element)

Village: Burizagakure
Rank: Genin
Clan: Mizore
Bloodline Trait: Curse Of The Ice Soul
Strengths: Chakra Control, Very Quick, Very Smart, Very Good Vision, Lasts Longer Fighting In The Cold.
Weaknesses: Wonded Easily, Weak in Strength, Heat Would Make Him Tired Fast, Could Over Plan Too Much,.

Equipment:

* x3(Kunai Strapped to his left leg with a bandage)

Fighting Techniques:

Name:Clone Technique
Art:Ninjutsu
Rank:E
Description:This is the simple academy jutsu that replicates the user with a clone. This clone cannot take or deal physical damage and doesn't have any physical matter, for example not crushing grass when walking or kicking up dirt when running.

Name:Transform Technique
Art:Ninjutsu
Rank:E
Description:This is another academy jutsu that allows the user to transform a clone, or object, or himself into another person or object.

Name:Replacement Technique
Art:Ninjutsu
Rank:E
Description:Yet another academy jutsu this one allows the user to replace themselves with a log or dummy right before impact from an enemy attack. Usually after the replacement has worked they will take refuge in a hiding spot and try to gain the advantage of a sneak attack.

Name: Nitrogen: Gas Mist no Jutsu
Rank: C
Range: All
Type: Offensive, Ninjutsu
Description: The user performs a number of handsigns. And the area becomes colder then cold a white mist covers the area, because of the coldness, the user would be able to perform Liquid Nitrogen with this mist, and even if the mist is gone the user can still make Liquid Nitrogen because the atmosphere is cold, this jutsu slows down the enemy by freezing the joints if they stand still for too long.

Relationships: None
Family: Clan members

Alright, here's what I'm going to have you change. You've got yourself something here that needs alteration. The information states you weigh about ten stones, I'll need you to convert that into lbs (the English system) and meters (the metric system). Meters are to be listed first with their English equivalent in parenthesis.

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M'kay, I'ma have you go ahead and add a brief description of your clan's story to your personality. It's much better to be more specific when addressing his temperamental state. Keep in mind, I will not accept this profile until the changes and clan are accepted (or removed).

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M'kay, if you're going to have 'killing spree' in your list of habits, you're definitely going to have to have something in his personality about this volatile state of mind that would contribute to why he'd do such things.

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Right here; we have a clerical error. It states that he trains for six hours daily. However, it only shows that he trains two hours (each) for ninjutsu and speed while his taijutsu remains at an hour. I'll ask that you do a quick 'snip and cut' job to edit this and remedy it.

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In your Shinobi Registration, I would like it very much if you were to separate the elements into both Primary and Combination element lists. If they both fall under a primary list, please exclude the combination list at this time. Also, there is a minor problem here in that Genin are allotted but one space for elements. This excludes special elements such as Nitrogen. If this is indeed a bloodline trait related element, I would very much like to see that next to it in parenthesis. This will make it so that profile moderators have an easier time determining your elements and their legitimacy.

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This will be a minor side note here; there is nothing to change. At this current time we are taking ranks of Jounin and below. If you wish to be a Jounin or Chuunin, adjust your character history accordingly, as well as the jutsu list, equipment, and anything else that should be effected by the change. If you're happy at genin rank, just state so in your reply.

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Your equipment list is lacking very much so. Having one type of item isn't something any person of a Genin rank would have. Remember that each item is limited to a certain number at Genin rank (follow the examples and you should be fine). Genin would have any, but are not limited to, the following items:

[Max: 15]Senbon
[Max: 15]Kunai
[Max: 3]Scroll (related to a technique)
[Max: 2]Tanto (a short, sheathed knife)
[Max: 1]Practice Iaito (Unsharpened Katana)
[Max: 5]Exploding tags
[Max: 10 ft]Chakra wire
[Max: 1]Medium (or small) sized pouch.

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Though, I do not intend to make you change anything on this part, I'd like it very much if you were to add more techniques to your jutsu list. Genin are allotted unlimited E-ranks, 5 D-ranks, and 1 C-rank technique. You would be well advized to follow those guidelines. You will not be able to use techniques that are not on your application during rp. You may, however, add new techniques to your list as you rp. Just remember, you are to have them separated until you have used them three times with a minimum of three paragraphs per post. This will ensure you have 'mastered' the technique.

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Once these changes have been made, I can give you the approval and you may start roll playing. :3 Onto your clan application now~ *flees*

Fixed everything, i dont like to carry much items so im happy with my 3 kunai, and my jutsus is like that for a reason...i dont want to add rubbish ones...that i will never use....

Alright, you have one last chance to add anything else to your application, such as jutsu or equipment.

e.e Approved. I'll give you another two days to decide whether or not you want to add anything new.