Taoreta Clan - Finished

Posts : 13 Points : 19 Join date : 2010-03-18

Background Description: The Taoreta clan is said to have been created by two angels at the beginning of the ninja world. Shiroi was the name of the angel with black wings and Makkuro was the name of the angel with white wings. It took many years for Shiroi and Makkuro to train the ninja they chose for there clan within time each ninja had ether unlocked dark or light chakra. Once there new chakra was unlocked the angels showed each ninja how to form there chakra into wings they could use for flight. Once they had all mastered there new chakra the angels told them they were the branch part of there clan, and that they would treat there children as there leaders for they would be the main part of the clan. It took thousands of years for the angels to have children and they went through many generations of the branch part of the clan. but finally a child was born and he was named Zyr after the great sun which gave them warmth and once the child came of age he would be there new leader so Shiroi and Makkuro could go back to the heavens to be with the rest of there family. There next child was a girl in which they named Chikyuu after the great earth which gave them land, and it was said that she would guide the branch clan with a soft heart and a gentle hand. there next and final child was name Tsuki after the great moon which lit there night sky, and it was said that she would be the one to guide Zyr to make sure he would lead the clan correctly. There next child was named Mizauki and she was named after the new moon and she was to tend to the gardens for the clan. There last child was named Hoshi after the stars and she was to care for the animals.

Elements:
Darkness or Light - can use other elements as well
Once a generation a ninja is born to the main branch who can use both - can only use those two elements

Bloodline:
Main Branch
shiboo shiryoku(Death eyes):

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The death eye gives the user the ability to make things seam dead for a period of time. It also gives them the ability to summon a "Dark angel" that they have met before, and bring forth the gates to hell.

inochi shiryoku(Life eyes):
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The life eye gives the user the ability to grant a dead person/plant/or even inanimate object life. It also gives the user the ability to summon a "light angel" that they have met before.

Side Branch
daraku shita tenshi(DAT):
DAT is basically the use of darkness or light chakra to a very great amount and to be able to form angel wings with the chakra

Extras:
Eye Information:
unlocking the eyes
The eyes can be unlocked at any age but sertion thing must be achieved first.

For the Death eyes, they must personally watch a person die. The closer the person was to them the stronger there eyes will be

For the Life eyes, they must plant a single plant (tree,flower,ext) and must keep it alive untill the day they die. If the plant dies, there "Life eyes" will dissaperr forever. The only way to get around this is to give life...in other words...have a child

Clan Jutsu
Darkness

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Light

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Posts : 145 Points : 173 Join date : 2010-02-14

Those eyes you have there, I'll just need you to give a brief description as to how old the user must be in order to activate them, how they are activated, and under what circumstances must they be activated. I have no problem with their abilities, I just wish to have you be more descriptive about the 'prerequisites' of obtaining this ability.

Alrighty, I'm going to have to call a foul on this technique on the basis that E-rank is too low of a level. I have a hard time believing that Academy Student level ninja would be able to master this technique with a small amount of training. Stage one should be, indeed, a C rank technique, due to the effects on the user's body, as well as it's abilities.

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Similarly, this would be a B-rank. The ability to jump higher, and 'glide' would be a nice asset and should be put into account when ranking the technique.

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Similarly, this would be an A-rank. The ability to fly would be a great asset to any shinobi. This goes especially for those who do not fly via summon. The chakra control for this technique would undoubtedly be of a very high standard.

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Alright, the same changes in rank should be made for the light style category as well.

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Once these changes have been made, I cannot see any other problems preventing me from accepting it. Of course, I cannot accept your character application without this being changed, so make sure to plan accordingly.

Subject: Re: Taoreta Clan - Finished Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:06 am

I fixed it

Quote :: The eyes can be unlocked at any age but sertion thing must be achieved first.

For the Death eyes, they must personally watch a person die. The closer the person was to them the stronger there eyes will be

For the Life eyes, they must plant a single plant (tree,flower,ext) and must keep it alive untill the day they die. If the plant dies, there "Life eyes" will dissaperr forever. The only way to get around this is to give life...in other words...have a child

And another note, Zyr is me....I was just to lazy to log onto my other account to fix the clan o.o

Posts : 145 Points : 173 Join date : 2010-02-14

Alrighty, every thing seems to be in order.

*gets out my mega stamp and slams it against this thread*

'APPROVED now gtho'

x3 Don'cha' love it?

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